Reviews for Breaking Point
eye-to-eye-heart-to-heart chapter 27 . 7/29/2014
Hi:) I really enjoyed reading that story! Somalia is my favorite and I like people who addresse it just as you did! I normally don't read ff when I notice they seem too OOC and yours definitely was but I really liked it anyway and completely read it through!
You said your first language is not English?! Well then a huge compliment, for not being a native your English is excellent!
I wish I could name it better but there were so many little things in your story that made it really worth reading. Like the details you listed when going into Tony's or Ziva's childhood or just describing things in general.
I also loved the ending even though I wouldn't have minded stronger Tiva from the beginning.
Well done :)
Guest chapter 8 . 10/19/2012
im crying. never has a fan fic EVER made me cry before. this is pure brilliance.
litteraly. there are no words. this is not just fanfic.. but literature.
Talitha Kumi chapter 16 . 9/4/2012
Brilliant writing. Keep it up. :)
mon-petit-pois chapter 27 . 5/16/2011
Wow. I loved this to pieces, tho u r responsible for my sleep deprivation;) I found this at like 0300 and eventually, I made myself go to bed otherwise I would be a zombie in the morning:) it was worth it, tho:)
earanemith chapter 1 . 3/11/2011
Hey, a dutchie to.

Oké dus, dan maar in het Nederlands. Echt een heel mooi en goed geschreven verhaal. Leest makkelijk, leuk en nou ja eigenlijk wat je gewoon wilt van een fanfictie. Ik hoop dat je nog een keer een sequel gaat schrijven zeker de moeite waard
Clax chapter 7 . 7/30/2010
Hey.. very real ideas, but I'm sure Tony would not have waited 04 broken fingers to do something...
rubiesandrain chapter 27 . 7/22/2010
AWWW! This is so amazing! They're in love, or at least at this point Tony is, and Ziva's on the road to recovery! This story is really outstandingly awesome! GREAT JOB! :)
Betherzz chapter 27 . 7/22/2010
great ending to the story ;)
SkyePrincess08 chapter 27 . 7/22/2010
OMG, I really hope you do a sequel or something to this because it was absolutly amazing and I don't want it to be over:) You could do a sequel about how Ziva continues to heal and her returning to work and her new relationship with Tony:) I agree that your writing style has really improved a lot and I will definatly look forward to some more stories from you. Bravo on finishing an incrediable story:):) Peace
ReginaCaelum chapter 27 . 7/22/2010
That was really good. A very sweet ending. I hope you continue to do stories.
ncisrules chapter 11 . 7/7/2010
Good story
rubiesandrain chapter 26 . 7/5/2010
AW! Poor Ziva! UPDATE SOON! :)
Nicoya456 chapter 26 . 7/5/2010
Nice story
Betherzz chapter 26 . 7/5/2010
good chapter... shes traumatized and shes not herself yet, and probably wont ever be back to the old ziva... tony watching over her is a good thing ;) but calling her affectionate names that are not his to call her just isnt right... calling her sweetcheeks or my ninja or baby or something, ziver is just a gibbs name its not a name tony should use, that just doesnt sound right commin from tony... kinda like the head slap thing, thats a gibbs thing alone, no one else should even try to attempt to pull that off... he called her baby while she was sleeping trying to soothe her and it worked, think he should try it while shes awake and keep using it or sweetcheeks or something else

its a great story cant wait to see what comes next
ChEmMiE chapter 25 . 6/27/2010
YAY! an update! :D

And I really liked it, especially the end...

Hope next update wont take too long
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