|Reviews for While the Music Lasts|
| Breanna3593 chapter 1 . 8/25/2013
Damn. You smacked me hard with reality right then. It's kind of bittersweet. Sigh.
Thanks for writing, I liked this. :)
| ordinary vamp chapter 1 . 12/9/2012
I don't usually read into this ship, but I love how you brought Severus and Hermione together. So captivating and well written. Thanks for sharing :)
| VirginaBlueBelle chapter 1 . 9/7/2011
Eek so many questions. Was she happy and surprised that he showed up? Was she still hurt? Did they live happily ever after or at least happily together?
| mkq.9317 chapter 1 . 2/16/2011
perfectly crafted story, as far as characters go. it's nice to see a stubborn Snape acting much like he did in the books. No fluff, sex-god, love 1st sight bs. The mini-epilogue opens a lot of doors for hope and speculation, although i personally liked it better without the 2 years later scenario. dark and cliched i suppose, but one of the better sshg one-shots in here.. :)
| troesnaja chapter 1 . 7/15/2010
I did not know you could do Romance but that Hermione/Draco/lucius fic (which i did not read in its entirity) came pretty close. I so hope you will also do more longer ss/hg fics in the future that blend angst drama darkness and romance together.
about this one:
I like it, the first more or less traditional ss/hg fic that I have read from you. They are both in-character which is very important. And humor is too at times so I like this lighter fic. btw off topic have you read books by karen slaughter? The mosst dark-angst filled books I have ever read but also with moments of romance. IU am not a big fan of all the marriage law or especially not of all the snape as a sex god fixs. Snape is ugly inside and out (for the most part). This ficlet is nice though, i hope they meet again after it. oh how sweet... I really needet this before continuing reading on with caged bird.
| Cosmyk Angel chapter 1 . 5/18/2010
Hey, do we get to hear about what happens next? This is a great story. I'd love to see you continue it. You just left us hanging at the end of the story.
| Anachronistic Anglophile chapter 1 . 5/17/2010
Very, very good story. But the ending was a bit rushed, and your leaving out of Severus' anxiety was a detriment, I think. But the rest was beautiful, simply marvelous.
| Elle6 chapter 1 . 1/26/2010
Beautiful story. You really make it seem effortless, getting them together. I greatly enjoyed this.
| LadySnape88 chapter 1 . 1/9/2010
i think there should have been some kind of closure between snape and hermione. you could easily make a second chapter, or even a whole (several chapter) story. there were no contraceptives (muggle/spell/potion). we don't even know if she opened the door to greet him or what she would even say.
| KatatonicRedHead chapter 1 . 1/7/2010
Oh... gosh. It takes a talented writer to make the reader feel the heartbreak in a story. This was really wonderful, though I wish you hadn't left it to the imagination. Please consider writing a sequel? Or better yet, PLEASE write a bit about what happened in the 2 years post one night stand! I would love to read that! Like, exactly what went through Snapes' head, and what Hermione did, etc. Anyway, I will certainly check out your other works. You are an intelligent writer. It's refreshing to find that on this site!
| j.h chapter 1 . 1/7/2010
| shadowontherun chapter 1 . 12/12/2009
no! What an ending! you're breaking our hearts here! What happens next! plz don't leave it to imagination... :(
its torture :(
what if,what if, what if, what if, what if, what if,
so many what ifs...
| snapefan2007 chapter 1 . 11/30/2009
you have to write another chapter or sequel so we know what happens! loved it!
| RheaBay chapter 1 . 11/20/2009
more, please...or i will die. excellent job; brilliantly done.
| Mooks chapter 1 . 11/20/2009
This is lovely! You've got both of them down brilliantly. As for the ending? Nothing but beautiful.