Oh man, I love how you made the Uzumaki family feared by everyone. It's absolutely priceless.

HA! I read the description, and thought 'oh, another time travel fic. I wonder if its any good?' I didn't expect a laugh-out-loud funny fic! Great job, look forward to next chapter

oh wow, i was laughing so much, this was funny! keep up the good work, i'll be following this one! XD

Whaaa! A very good story! Please continue!

Ahhh! I love your story! Its awesome, action-y, dramatic, and hilarious all at the same time! I can't wait till the next chapter! Please update soon!

Well, if nothing else, you get points for originality- a true rarity in fanfiction these days. While time travel fics are done to death, many are good, if not great- while others bomb extremely harshly.

I have high hopes for the rest of this one though.

ooooooook. Really, awesome story so far, but it's really starting to drift into the crack-fic range. love hyper naruto though. also can't wait to se what's coming. cya

wow pretty good story so far!, when will the other three Time Travelers find out about Naruto

LOL I LOVE THIS! i can't wait to read more! it's funny as h*ll! LOL

This is hilarious, especially the part about antifreeze. Love your explanation for Naruto's immunity to poison.

Really like the mixture of characters and ideas, but there are a couple parts that repeat themselves, and a few parts where characters are dropping information about the future in the presence of other people that should raise questions.

Other than those few problems, I'm really enjoying reading this, and hope you update soon!

Am i tho only one laughing at Sasuke? Cuz yeeeeah. Sooooo laughing now.

Karasu's mind theater

'Train me!'

'...screw you duck-butt-hair.'

'But i need power!'

'I dont care. Your an ass.'

'It is an honor to train an Uchiha!'

'No. It is a pain-in-the-ass to train an Uchiha. It is an HONOR to be trained by a UZUMAKI!'

XD

Quotation marks go after punctuation.

I.e. "take his frustrations out on the demon". turns into "take his frustrations out on the demon." and "Predator", turns into "Predator,"

You don't typically see "text". in any English novel that's published. It's always "text." instead.

It's Ero-Sennin, not Ero-senin. At least you weren't using sanin, which is wrong on two accounts. The first being Sannin, the second being that it's Sennin (Hermit), not Sannin (Three Ninja), that's part of his nickname.

Fucking AWESOME. You gotta update soon. I want the part where Itachi arrives in friggin' Konoha with Kisame! D

OHHHH! LOLOLOLOLOL! I haven't stopped laughing since I started reading this. It's great! Thank you for sharing with us and I look forward to seeing where you take it from here.