Reviews for Time MixUp |
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![]() ![]() OMG! *Dies lauging* |
![]() ![]() ![]() You are a genious! This story is fuckin' hillarious dude! Great work! -Niclas |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is a) total crack and b) totally awesome. I love it :D -s. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was reading a story called Mind Farts that had an omake that led me to this story when I got an idea. Zabuza himself cannot betray and kill Gatou unless Gatou betrays him first right? Well what if Zabuza decided to unleash an Uzumaki upon Gatou? The omake also had haku as a girl and a legend about uzumaki bed-prowess causing haku to try to tackle naruto in a kiss. Just some idea's that would be awesome if you could incorporate them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg this story is insane...BUT MAKES MORE SENSE THAN OTHERS good and funny job |
![]() ![]() ![]() very good |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome chaptr and stoy and cant wait for the next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() After reading all of this story, I have one thing to say about it: BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA Too Too good. Keep it up :-) |
![]() ![]() lol lol lol LOL |
![]() ![]() ROFL |
![]() ![]() i like this. |
![]() ![]() hm... |
![]() ![]() ![]() So funny! Original approach to time travel. I can't wait for more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Uzumaki flee on sight order! Mwahahahaha! (Best idea ever.) Heh, if Naruto inherits the Fourth's flee on sight order as well, he'll have half the world running from him. Not even counting the 9Tails. Thank you for your story! |