Reviews for Time MixUp
narubleone chapter 15 . 2/12/2010
WOW! I love this!

When's next chapter?
pk chapter 15 . 2/11/2010
I forgot if I reviewed before but I wanted to say that your fic is awesome and hilarious and full of crack, and I can't wait to see what else you come up with. XD

THANK YOU FOR SHARING IT! _b
stresscanleadtobaldness chapter 3 . 2/11/2010
Ah, this story is great. The idea is really creative, and it's not incredibly dark and depressing either.

When I first saw that this was a Humor fic, I was a little worried that it would turn out to be a nonsensical crack fic, but it isn't. It's a perfect balance between serious intentions and funny moments. I love how everyone's on their own personal mission, but are all tied together (some more closely than others).

Well, I'm on my way to read the rest of the story...take care to update constantly!
AngelForm chapter 15 . 2/11/2010
I’m not sure what disturbs me more, Uchiha funeral traditions or Haku knitting with deadly weapons.
onlykeptaccountforstoryalerts chapter 15 . 2/11/2010
...That is disturbing, the avoiding of meat consumption at Uchiha funerals. Hehe... Lovely touch though.
Shivera chapter 15 . 2/11/2010
This is fasinating. Update quickly, please.
Weasel Fu chapter 15 . 2/11/2010
Huh, well the time travelers knowing about each other (except for Naruto) will be interesting. There's some potential for some really hilarious moments because they don't know about Naruto and Naruto doesn't know about them. They'll probably try and protect Naruto during the chunnin exams and Naruto will be trying to get away from their protections to handle Gaara and Orochimaru himself. I look forward to seeing where you go with this next.
Weasel Fu chapter 12 . 2/11/2010
Naruto on meds is a great idea, and one that I haven't seen done before. I also loved the scenes with Sasuke and the rabbit. I really like that you aren't just mindlessly bashing Sasuke, it's much more interesting to see him as someone who has genuine problems.

It's hilarious how the four time travelers are tripping over each other and jumping to wrong conclusions based on their knowledge of future events.
Weasel Fu chapter 10 . 2/11/2010
I love the part at the end where Tenzo thinks Naruto has talked the demon brothers into seeing the error of their ways when they're really just scared of him.
killing u with umbrellas chapter 15 . 2/11/2010
loved it.
NarutosBrat chapter 14 . 2/11/2010
Okay, let me see if I understand this.

The rumor about hat married couple were true, and Sakumo Hatake was the result?

Oh my god, I thought it couldn't get crazier, and it just did. Naruto is addicted to anti-freeze. Now that is classic.

WHen I read that part about Naruto being the potential successor for all those people, I got to wondering. Danzo liked Naruto's mom, would Naruto have been on Danzo's potential successor list? Even still, why do I get the feeling that Naruto being on Hiashi's list of 'boys not to muder if his daughter brings them home' was more shocking than his being on multiple potential Hokage successor lists? And speaking of, I'm guessing the lists he'd have been on were Tsunade's, Jiraiya's, Sarutobi's, Minato's, and Koharu's, Homura's. It would be hilarious if he was even on Danzo's, Orochimaru's, or another Kage's, and no one even knew.
NarutosBrat chapter 11 . 2/11/2010
I laughed, I cried, I nearly pissed my pants.

Uzumaki Flee-On-Sights, Kyuubified ADHD; there's no way you can make this any better. None at all.
kurokitsune666 chapter 15 . 2/11/2010
Its an AWESOME!story UPDATE SOON!
Emanuel Black chapter 15 . 2/11/2010
Ahahahahaha! It's so funny I can't stop laughing. The funeral customs were just disgusting. Awesome chapter, hope to see some more soon.
NarutosBrat chapter 7 . 2/11/2010
and somehow ended up causing a fight that wrecked half the bar (rumor has it that Iruka was somehow involved)- let me guess, Iruka mistakenly thought Jiraiya was trying to get Naruto drunk to make him more...pliable to certain actions.
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