Reviews for Time MixUp
JadeStoneTheYounger chapter 13 . 12/24/2009
I really like your story so far. Please update again really soon.
Bobboky chapter 13 . 12/23/2009
awesome work
aero13 chapter 13 . 12/23/2009
heh...flying squirrels!haha funny...
FluxBlade chapter 13 . 12/22/2009
I like the hint of what Tenzo's summons were in the middle, as usual, I found the chapter to be hilarious. Also interesting to see that Kakashi noticed Jiraiya came from the future as well though said nothing. Though that fact that no one else realizes that he time-traveled yet is funny. The two groups of summons working together is funny. I wonder if Naruto will summon the future Gamabunta by mistake without realizing it?

Thank you for the funny update.
supremebandit chapter 13 . 12/21/2009
you were completely evil to do something like that to Kakashi... should have done worse, although i do think it is funny how you placed Iruka into all this, good work and good luck on future chapters
Guest chapter 13 . 12/21/2009
Naruto needing medication on that level? You know, no one really bothers thinking of the consequences of having that much chakra. If it's supposed to be a balance of mental and physical energy, Naruto should put Einstein to shame a couple hundred times over just to break even. Being on a permanent 10-pounds-of-sugar rush It definitely one good way of explaining that.

Great job on the fic and good luck on the next chapter
solunaeris chapter 13 . 12/21/2009
To put it simply...I FREAKING love your story! It makes me crack up and curl up into a ball and laugh. My roommate just stared at me weirdly. I especially love your rationalization of Hyper!Naruto with having Jinchuuriki induced ADHD. So what would happen if Naru got his hands onto a cup of expresso while off his med?
Tetris Ex Machina chapter 13 . 12/20/2009
Great chapter!
kurokitsune666 chapter 13 . 12/20/2009
Its a great story update soon!
Janneia chapter 3 . 12/20/2009
Loved that little snippet with Tenzo and his commander: "Leave approved for mental health reasons" PRICELESS. xD
Janneia chapter 1 . 12/20/2009
Oh... very, VERY interesting premise. xD Looking forward to reading the rest of it! My favourite line though, was this one: 'he'd always wondered what would happen if Naruto were placed in a locked room with Danzo'. Because, LOL. x3
onii chapter 13 . 12/20/2009
LMAOROFLOLZ that best describes this story, i love the flee on sight order on his clan
Tetris Ex Machina chapter 12 . 12/19/2009
Great story!
Mikomimaru chapter 12 . 12/14/2009
This is a great story and I love that Naruto without meds is like Rock Lee on Sake. XD Great story, I hope you continue writing.
Geminia chapter 7 . 12/7/2009
I do love what you have been doing with Iruka's character. Very amusing.

Gemini
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