Reviews for Time MixUp |
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KunochiDreamer chapter 12 . 11/25/2009 Really good chapter. |
hydrianway1013 chapter 12 . 11/25/2009 Awesome story! Next chapter, let hyper-Naruto get to Gato...and drive the guy to committ suicde, perchance? |
Loatroll chapter 12 . 11/25/2009 I loved the bit in Naruto's own perspective :D Great work. Really looking forward to more. Hm I wonder if Tenzo will just tell Kakashi about the timetravel, he did tell his CO but that might just have been to tell the truth without the person possibly believing him. Looking good. Interesting on Pakkun. Thanks for the read. |
Habu2010 chapter 12 . 11/25/2009 good story, please update soon. |
anonymous chapter 12 . 11/25/2009 This story is really funny! I can imagine Sandaime arresting Tenzo and handing him over to T&I. Then, T&I would get Kakashi, Jiraiya and Naruto to see him with hopes that it will loosen up his tongue. Kakashi because he's Naruto's sensei, Jiraiya 'cause he's Naruto's godfather and Naruto 'cause he's the one Tenzo gives the necklace to. Then they will start talking and everyone will find out about each other and they will cooperate to save the future. At least that's how it works out in my mind. Hope you update soon. :) |
Sanz0girl chapter 12 . 11/24/2009 Oh? Are Kakashi and Tenzo/Yamato going to tell each other? antoher awesome hilarious chapter. Loved it. |
Shianelle chapter 11 . 11/24/2009 *heart* I love this story! -cackles- The way you've written everyone has been hilarious! -snicker- I adore the flee on sight thing. -giggle- *heart* |
baduqwa chapter 11 . 11/24/2009 Wow...hilarious! You have some ideas here that I've never seen in other fics before. I love it! |
This is getting old chapter 11 . 11/23/2009 yes. XD You have become my new hero. Can't wait for Yamamoto to pop up again. I feel bad for what's going to happen to him. |
anothvortex chapter 11 . 11/22/2009 Holly fricken hell, I actually nearly blacked out from the laughing! That was awesome! Thank you for the awesome work, and I eagerly await the next chapter! |
Shinigami chapter 11 . 11/21/2009 Sakura needs a major wake-up call. As for Sasuke-perhaps he will think twice about following Oro-teme...As for Tenzo he will have major explaining to do to Hiruzen and Tsunade...By the way-ARE Minato and Naruto related to Tsunade? Because in the manga Naruto looks a lot like Nawaki. According to the canon Naruto is a mini version of Minato, only with whiskers...So mind clearing up that one? |
Roosjuh1986 chapter 11 . 11/20/2009 OMG I began with this story like.. ohh great another timetravel.. but before I even read about half a page I fell in love... pleasse keep on updating I just love ur story! |
Q-vadis chapter 11 . 11/20/2009 Ha ha ha! This last chapter made me laught a ass off! Just, don't stop updating! |
ScribbleWorld chapter 11 . 11/20/2009 Ha! Great! I'm glad to FINALLY have a different type of time travel story, other than just "naruto goes back and saves the world," or "Sakura goes back and falls in love with Itachi." The idea of multiple timetravelers who don't know there are others is great! *anime thumbs up*! Update soon! |
xDelta-Ha-chanx chapter 11 . 11/18/2009 BAWHAHAHAHAHAHA! that is soo cool! although author san will explain why the uzamaki clan was so feared later? and how did they get wiped out if they were that awesome? |