Reviews for It Runs Through The Family
Ismeme Daughter of Athena chapter 34 . 7/4/2011
This is a very good story! And, seeing as you've edited all of the chapters that you've put up so far, and I can't see any traces of a Mary Sue, can you update soon? I can't wait to see how Harry explains the rest-does he use a Pensieve? Also, will Jess confront him about the part that he left out about King's Cross Station and Dumbledore? Anyway, can't wait to see where you're going with this.

-Ismeme
ThatOneGirlDoodlingInMathClass chapter 6 . 4/16/2011
Lemme guess, the dark-skenned and blond chicks were Angelina and maybe Luna?
VioletSkye56 chapter 9 . 2/16/2011
Wow, great story so far! It's very interesting. Only thing that bothers me is that it's Rose not Rosie but it still okay. Haha. So back to reading...
ThatOneGirlDoodlingInMathClass chapter 2 . 1/27/2011
Tres bien. This should be interesting... I never imagined any magical genes would survive contact with Vernon Dursley's DNA, but I guess I was wrong.
Spyridon chapter 34 . 1/18/2011
I got to let this story go. I only read it as I though Harry and Dudley would be the main characters but it seems to be focusing on their children. It's a good story but not my cup of tea. Good luck on the revisions.

Just as a word of advice, when you begin to upload new chapters with the revised sections, get rid of this Author's Note Chapter. Destroys the flow of the story.
HedwigFly chapter 34 . 1/16/2011
aaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Rene you whore!

just had to ruin it for the rest of us huh!

plz update i really like the story and Jessica is so not a mary sue!
NSNx chapter 34 . 1/3/2011
I really love this story the Harry/Jessica and teddy/Jessica what I really would live is that something bad happens at jesses home and she runs away to Harrys and they take in Jessica and raise her as their own xx and more teddy/harry please update xxxxx
Midnight Cheesecake chapter 34 . 12/31/2010
Ahh! please don't leave the story! It's really gooodddd. :( :( :(. Well, at least it's coming back someday. Sigh. It's a REALLY good story.
dazey186 chapter 31 . 12/9/2010
i've actually really enjoyed your story up until this point and i am still enjoying it but i feel the need to point something out. Snape was a death eater yes he changed sides but he was a known death eater and they allowed him to teach so saying Teddy isnt allowed to teach doesn't make sense
Anon chapter 12 . 11/27/2010
I have a feeling this may be better classified as a "Lily Luna P & OC" story than a "Harry & Dudley" story. Not 100% sure yet though. Will keep reading. So far so good.
Blik chapter 34 . 11/23/2010
Hey, I won't say that Jessica isn't sharp as a tack, because she is, but I hardly think she's a Mary Sue. She's just confused and is putting these things together for the first time.

You don't need to be so hard on yourself - one reviewer's opinion does not objective truth make.
MyFantasySoul chapter 34 . 11/16/2010
What is a Mary-Sue?
Guest chapter 34 . 11/15/2010
Oh for heavens sake you can't leave it there! Its just getting interesting. I have to read the dursley reaction when she tells them the whole story!
lyaser53 chapter 34 . 11/14/2010
Oh for heavens sake you can't leave it there! Its just getting interesting. I have to read the dursley reaction when she tells them the whole story!
CoryAvellana chapter 34 . 11/7/2010
Noooo! I was up until around 3 in the morning trying to finish your story - I get up hoping to finish it off and this is what I get? Oh the horror! Hahaha - it's such a good story :)

Please update soon, or I might just go insane... okay insane-er.

Zakuro

P.S Sherlock was amazing! No wonder you got addicted - I did too :)
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