Reviews for It Runs Through The Family
jaufanfic chapter 34 . 1/5/2012
I'm actually really enjoying this story, I would like to read more. Update soon.
butterflyrain23 chapter 20 . 11/26/2011
well despite what the review you got before said I thought it was a really good story. I loved it,for the simple fact is I have never read a story like this before. I really did enjoy it and I do hope you will write more stuff soon or continue with this even though I am not sure you will.
kitty chapter 34 . 10/14/2011
Its been over a year since you updated. I think we can conclude this story has been abandoned. A shame it was a good story so far.
CastleVikkiHP chapter 34 . 9/27/2011
I have really enjoyed reading this story. I love it.

I am confused by you saying that Jess was becoming Mary-Sue. I have never heard of this and was wondering if you could explain it to me.

Thanks. I hope you update this at some point.

Vikki x
Vaitiare chapter 34 . 7/19/2011
I've really enjoyed reading this story (as it's now 1am and all I've done for the past couple hours is read it...haha) and although maybe before you had made revisions Jessica was Mary-Sue-ish, I definitely didn't see any of it when I read it! Although Jessica's character could use some fleshing out, as almost half of the story has not been focused on her (she's the observer) it made sense not to focus only on developing her character. As such, I really hope that you decide to update this soon - I can't wait to read it!
Morzan's Elvish Daughter chapter 9 . 7/14/2011
One major corection needs to be made in this story; They start on September 1, near the end of the summer, and yet you have winter conditions in your story right now.
Ismeme Daughter of Athena chapter 34 . 7/4/2011
This is a very good story! And, seeing as you've edited all of the chapters that you've put up so far, and I can't see any traces of a Mary Sue, can you update soon? I can't wait to see how Harry explains the rest-does he use a Pensieve? Also, will Jess confront him about the part that he left out about King's Cross Station and Dumbledore? Anyway, can't wait to see where you're going with this.

-Ismeme
ThatOneGirlDoodlingInMathClass chapter 6 . 4/16/2011
Lemme guess, the dark-skenned and blond chicks were Angelina and maybe Luna?
VioletSkye56 chapter 9 . 2/16/2011
Wow, great story so far! It's very interesting. Only thing that bothers me is that it's Rose not Rosie but it still okay. Haha. So back to reading...
ThatOneGirlDoodlingInMathClass chapter 2 . 1/27/2011
Tres bien. This should be interesting... I never imagined any magical genes would survive contact with Vernon Dursley's DNA, but I guess I was wrong.
Spyridon chapter 34 . 1/18/2011
I got to let this story go. I only read it as I though Harry and Dudley would be the main characters but it seems to be focusing on their children. It's a good story but not my cup of tea. Good luck on the revisions.

Just as a word of advice, when you begin to upload new chapters with the revised sections, get rid of this Author's Note Chapter. Destroys the flow of the story.
HedwigFly chapter 34 . 1/16/2011
aaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Rene you whore!

just had to ruin it for the rest of us huh!

plz update i really like the story and Jessica is so not a mary sue!
NSNx chapter 34 . 1/3/2011
I really love this story the Harry/Jessica and teddy/Jessica what I really would live is that something bad happens at jesses home and she runs away to Harrys and they take in Jessica and raise her as their own xx and more teddy/harry please update xxxxx
Midnight Cheesecake chapter 34 . 12/31/2010
Ahh! please don't leave the story! It's really gooodddd. :( :( :(. Well, at least it's coming back someday. Sigh. It's a REALLY good story.
dazey186 chapter 31 . 12/9/2010
i've actually really enjoyed your story up until this point and i am still enjoying it but i feel the need to point something out. Snape was a death eater yes he changed sides but he was a known death eater and they allowed him to teach so saying Teddy isnt allowed to teach doesn't make sense
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