Reviews for It Runs Through The Family
NSNx chapter 34 . 1/3/2011
I really love this story the Harry/Jessica and teddy/Jessica what I really would live is that something bad happens at jesses home and she runs away to Harrys and they take in Jessica and raise her as their own xx and more teddy/harry please update xxxxx
Midnight Cheesecake chapter 34 . 12/31/2010
Ahh! please don't leave the story! It's really gooodddd. :( :( :(. Well, at least it's coming back someday. Sigh. It's a REALLY good story.
dazey186 chapter 31 . 12/9/2010
i've actually really enjoyed your story up until this point and i am still enjoying it but i feel the need to point something out. Snape was a death eater yes he changed sides but he was a known death eater and they allowed him to teach so saying Teddy isnt allowed to teach doesn't make sense
Anon chapter 12 . 11/27/2010
I have a feeling this may be better classified as a "Lily Luna P & OC" story than a "Harry & Dudley" story. Not 100% sure yet though. Will keep reading. So far so good.
Blik chapter 34 . 11/23/2010
Hey, I won't say that Jessica isn't sharp as a tack, because she is, but I hardly think she's a Mary Sue. She's just confused and is putting these things together for the first time.

You don't need to be so hard on yourself - one reviewer's opinion does not objective truth make.
MyFantasySoul chapter 34 . 11/16/2010
What is a Mary-Sue?
Guest chapter 34 . 11/15/2010
Oh for heavens sake you can't leave it there! Its just getting interesting. I have to read the dursley reaction when she tells them the whole story!
lyaser53 chapter 34 . 11/14/2010
Oh for heavens sake you can't leave it there! Its just getting interesting. I have to read the dursley reaction when she tells them the whole story!
CoryAvellana chapter 34 . 11/7/2010
Noooo! I was up until around 3 in the morning trying to finish your story - I get up hoping to finish it off and this is what I get? Oh the horror! Hahaha - it's such a good story :)

Please update soon, or I might just go insane... okay insane-er.

Zakuro

P.S Sherlock was amazing! No wonder you got addicted - I did too :)
musicdiva37 chapter 34 . 11/1/2010
not that im actually sure what a mary-sue is but i think jessica's character is just right for what your trying to do with the story. you need someone who has no idea what went on to finish it off although i think it would work better if dudley was there to here as well.
Phoenix Lee Evyns chapter 34 . 10/28/2010
understandable, I eagerly await the stories return. This story as become very interesting to read and while there have been times when I considered not reading it anymore, something about it kept me going.

Good luck in your meditations and everything concerning the story.
Crescent Beam Shower chapter 34 . 10/27/2010
What the hell? She's not a Mary Sue.
FriendofMolly chapter 34 . 10/26/2010
Robyn,

I'll be waiting.

FoM
Persidie chapter 34 . 10/26/2010
She is not a mary-sue. Just a plain Jane at times. she's not like that. maybe they don't see her the way I do. She's a bit of a plot device though. But what characters don't do that at times. you should wait for more people saying she's Mary-sue before you let it bother you.
Anonymous chapter 34 . 10/25/2010
I don't think she's a Mary Sue. I think she's just a nice, eleven-year-old girl. Just don't make her fantastic in all the school courses (even Hermione was a bit faulty in DAtDA), and you're good.
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