Reviews for It Runs Through The Family
WobblyJelly chapter 34 . 10/25/2010
Just started reading this today and think it's awesome, but who is Mary-sue? I've heard of her before, but I forgot who she is...
ginevraweasleyrocks chapter 34 . 10/25/2010
Ok to be honest even I feel that though Jessica is a VERY good character she has started moving on the mary-sue path. But it can be improved with a little reconsideration or nothing at all. You can just be a little careful in your future chapters :)

I really love this story and I really, really hope that you do continue it :D
xteamxjacobxbabyx chapter 34 . 10/25/2010
hey, ive read your authors note and i have to say i like jessica so i was just wondering what a mary sue is?
Rene chapter 33 . 10/22/2010
Hmm... this Jess Dursley is turning into a mary-sue with every chapter.
DukeBrymin chapter 33 . 10/21/2010
Thanks for the new chapter!
petros308 chapter 33 . 10/20/2010
I like that you had Ron give the emotional responce to Harry's "death". Ron gets a great deal of greif in other fan-fics but he treats Harry like any other brother. Ron would pull out his heart from his cheast for Harry. It is about love, and I misted up a bit
alexa chapter 33 . 10/19/2010
just wondering when the next chapters will be up.. it was short (not that short) per chapter but was still good, practically summarized the whole series :D pls continue with the story, it's really good.
Teufel1987 chapter 9 . 10/18/2010
Nice ... though I think you have something against the English/Scottish weather ...

because I don't think you will have Quote:the fierce whip of winter wind whistling:End Quote in the beginning of autumn ...

Cause it is Scotland, not Greenland, or Iceland! :)
Teufel1987 chapter 6 . 10/18/2010
So I guess that George managed to get his ear replaced then ... cause Jessica didn't say anything about it ...
Teufel1987 chapter 4 . 10/18/2010
Quote:Ginny had appeared in the room, dressed in jeans and a long winter coat, along with matching gloves and scarf. :End Quote

"A long winter coat along with matching gloves and a scarf"? In the middle of summer?
eternal vampire chapter 33 . 10/16/2010
Good to hear from ou again. I think this chapter is verywell written an you have a lot in it. I enjoyed reading it. Take care and have a great night.
Luiz4200 chapter 33 . 10/16/2010
I missed this fic. Isn't there anything that can be done for Teddy?
Kellsabelle chapter 33 . 10/16/2010
This was pretty good! Please keep writing and update soon!

xx Kelsabelle.
FriendofMolly chapter 33 . 10/16/2010
Chip,

Thank you very much for this update. It was as it should be. Now I look forward to the next, to watch Harry tell Jessica what was not said at the last. But I do understand you wanting to finish this, the big event has been done, now you need to wrap it up I suppose that too is a difficult part. You want to end as you started with a memorable story.

FoM
ginevraweasleyrocks chapter 33 . 10/16/2010
It was a good chapter!

Woah! Jess could figure it out!

I loved it :)
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