Reviews for Til Death Do Us Part
Proud Fujoshi chapter 1 . 12/11/2012
I think it's becuz Spain heard a gun shot then'm not too sure...
NONAMESWEREAVAILABLE chapter 1 . 3/3/2011

I don't know whether to be ecstatic or worried about Spain's mental state for him to be having those kinds of dreams.
ileana425 chapter 1 . 10/23/2010
It's not shitty it is beautiful! I liked it a lot
herpaderp chapter 1 . 6/15/2010
So it was just a dream?

Or is 'Waking up' Antonio dying, and waking up to something better?

Or am I thinking too hard?

oh well.

Cute, I liked it.
FreaksAreBeautiful chapter 1 . 4/1/2010
Okay 1) that was not all that depressing or I'm a drepressing person myself XD 2) maybe yoiu caould have added to the what was going on before hand and then it would most likely add to the mood ten fold. Hope that was contructive~
foxfary chapter 1 . 3/26/2010
waht happened O.O did he get lucky and it was all rily was just a bad dream?
Prince of Anything chapter 1 . 2/17/2010
It... it was a dream? It'd better be a dream, dammit! *cries so hard she starts laughing*
Nobodies Have Hearts chapter 1 . 11/8/2009
"Lovi, I promise. If I ever lost you, I’d…

He lifted the gun soundlessly, resting the barrel on his own temple.

Well, I’d kill myself!"

That was the best thing I've read in a while. I really loved how you wrote that part.
yolapeoples chapter 1 . 11/8/2009
*reads story*

*stares at screen*

*remembers to breathe*

WAH! "Antonio woke up." *shakes head back and forth* I always fall for those~!

That was good! The one question I had (why Lovi was dead) was answered and it was fully creepy yet had a (somewhat?) happy ending.

I liked the flashback-y italic-y lines (My vocabulary has reached a new low...) in between the actual (dream?) lines. (But maybe I'm just nerdy like that...)

Now that I look back at it, the idea of dream vs. reality is, like, everywhere. Which makes it so much cooler.

Must go imagine a happy world where Antonio freaks Lovi out about his dream and all is well now~~!

Anyway, GREAT JOB!

~ Yolapeoples
sriracha style dad chapter 1 . 11/8/2009
Aw, come on, I was going to write this! *kicks trash can and scowls*

...really, though, it was good. Ne, don't be so hard on yourself.


*bats eyelashes* Write more Hetalia, ne?