Reviews for Somewhere In Between
CSG chapter 22 . 7/4
This was a good one. Thanks for sharing it with us. :)
Guest chapter 13 . 6/23
I have no words for Bella anymore. I just hate how weak and pathetic she is. He doesnt want me...no he wont sleep with a married woman. She is a hoebag
Guest chapter 9 . 6/23
She makes me ashamed to be a woman. Totally pathetic.
Guest chapter 5 . 6/23
They are both selfish assholes. Using people
Guest chapter 4 . 6/23
Im sorry but shit bella is a bitch. She NEVER should have gotten married. What she is doing to him is just mean and she deserves a punch to the face.
jk chapter 17 . 7/26/2016
there was laurents name...along with a date...the wrong date!

is that fucking supposed to mean anything to us?
jk chapter 16 . 7/26/2016
there is one huge ass whole in this story.
if Edward thought that he crashed HIS CAR why didn't he contact the police to get information ? if it was his car that he crashed...then he'd have a fucking name wouldn't he? an address? social sercurity number? ect ect...I find it strange that he would never contact the police that took the report about the accident...like you would wake up not knowing shit and trust some bitch to do everything...and even if the car was fucking totaled theyd still get the vin number off it...since theres what? seven of them in the car...and then Edward would have had his name...well in theory. it seems like he never did anything to find out who he was...if you woke up in Alaska not knowing who you were...youd ask about the car you were driving...youd look at missing people reports from surrounding states...he had a time line to work with...it just seems like he didn't do shit
jk chapter 5 . 7/25/2016
I don't really understand why Edward is thinking that bella wouldn't move on or date or marry ...Edward does realize that hes been "Dead" for over four fucking years right? and hell just yesterday he sooooo determined to move on himself that he set up some kind of sex date with tanwhore...and he got a hand/blow job...
just sayin
Kopec82 chapter 8 . 8/15/2015
He is right,
ai se eu te pego chapter 22 . 8/3/2015
Nice too much angst tho
sue1zide chapter 7 . 8/2/2015
Bella fucked up, royally. If she was so in love with Edward how could she get married? The way I see it, she doesn't deserve Edward. Bitch.
Guest chapter 22 . 7/9/2015
So very unrealistic
cuteascherries chapter 22 . 7/9/2015
: )
Texas Bottle Blonde chapter 22 . 3/3/2015
Really enjoyed your story as it was very original and well written. Although I wanted things to work out between Bella and Edward, you were fair to James.
Guest chapter 9 . 2/16/2015
Why do they keep calling her daughter by her different names? It's confusing.
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