Reviews for The Hope of the Senju Clan
UltraMickey chapter 1 . 8/13
This story is dead. Rest In Peace story.
UchihaIkeda chapter 41 . 8/11
Your fic is so AWESOME...;)
Please update soon...:)
stylo1 chapter 15 . 8/11
you've changed way more then just his mother; minato' parents where already death, kyuubi was not free. but these are minor things that could havr bren mentioned in the summary.
but the story itself is just to long, a lotmof double explaintions, bad flow, often read more like a report from an outsider, i am at chapter 15 basicly 300k and its only at the wave mission. to many sitiuations are a setup to follow canon, yes thing are different but they stay the same.
biggest reason i quit here is the bad flow and boring fights, she does his but he saw that coming so he did this but she saw that coming.
stylo1 chapter 11 . 8/11
damn your english is bad, i really hope you'll not be following canon as that would be to boring and make all narutos hard work for nothing
Zero Arashi Uchiha chapter 41 . 7/31
At Last! about time you updated! so good to see you back, I hope you update your other fics.
zaki786 chapter 1 . 7/31
nice to see you back
Sakura Lisel chapter 3 . 7/30
You should edit this chapter and change all mention of how many months was left before Tsunade gave birth. *lol* like in the beginning of the chapter you started out saying that in the next NINE months of her pregnancy. Don't you mean SEVEN months? Back in the first chapter, it took Tsunade TWO months to realize she was pregnant, yet in this chapter your saying that shes back to being a full nine months after her talk with Minato and the others. *lol*
reaperofages chapter 41 . 7/30
loving this story and hope that you will continue to post more
tiwari2041 chapter 1 . 7/28
wow nice chapter, though i dont really like kurotsuchi that much i wont mind her in the harem, it is one of the longest fanfics i have read and its really nice, unlike some other which get boring after awhile, you contined to make it interesting and enjoyable, the time went by so fast that i thought i skipped a few chapters. plus you gave each and every character detail. it was fun and very entertaining too read. im just waiting for a new chapter.
omegaderose chapter 6 . 7/26
Tsutenkyaku is teh Heaven Kick of Pain and NOT painful sky leg you should get your infoa better
tiwari2041 chapter 30 . 7/26
This was the greatest chapter yet, the scenes, were just so exciting and electrifying, the omakes were great the jutsu, it seemed like a full on ninja, full metal alchemist and a bunch of other shows combined. It was too good, I just want to see the reaction of the other people that Naruto still has one more trump card.
tiwari2041 chapter 22 . 7/26
The omake was actually good, you know this is the one story which in which I wouldn’t mind a harem, as the kiss was hot and I like all the girls that like except Ino.
Guest chapter 22 . 7/24
Idk but the omake made me laugh a lot
Seja chapter 11 . 7/23
Wait, didnt Naruto only arrive to the village a few days ago. I'm asking this cause during his introduction he says he wants to become a hokage, lol. That was hella fast
Seja chapter 7 . 7/23
This was a fun chapter
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