Reviews for The Hope of the Senju Clan
JCarrasco chapter 41 . 5/5
Keep it up I love this story please.
PJO18 chapter 11 . 5/5
I love the story but I think you're main problem is that you use as too much I doubt you'll see this but if you do reduce on your use of as
CoffeeHandShaky chapter 6 . 5/2
Goddamn this grammar is unbearable
locked e chapter 11 . 4/22
i love this story and all but DANG FIX THAT FUCKING GRAMMAR LOL

''Naruto though to himself''

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and it makes it hella hard to read but other than that its pretty good.
locked e chapter 10 . 4/22
I hope its a Naruto x Yugito ship
Bhavya Poonia chapter 5 . 4/10
Uhm, I don't mean to be rude or anything, but the quality of this chapter was lower than the previous ones, although the content was nice and enjoyable, there were a lot of grammatical and punctuation errors. Other than that, it was a pretty enjoyable chapter.
TheLightYagami chapter 20 . 4/9
i'm sure author still active in fanfiction Still remember reading this fic back in 2013-14. Really one of my top favourite naruto fanfic and most famous fanfiction in term of senju Naruto.
Clown Exorcist chapter 5 . 4/6
Her treatment of her teammate could lead to his demise lol. Not tryna be serious or anything but you make it look like Females in this Fic are no more than to be used as when Females are referred in this story, it has something to do with being perverted or downright abusive
FledditFliveflind chapter 5 . 4/4
Maybe it's a good thing you abandoned this garbage. What the hell is this trash?
FledditFliveflind chapter 1 . 4/4
I can't imagine how brain dead you must be to not finish a single story you uploaded. You're a joke.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/3
All the story could have been so much better!
Amir chapter 6 . 3/30
I’m like Russian and the person who knows many languages can say that how you played with words like friend and girl friend works only in English not in Japanese at all
Landon Turoski chapter 41 . 3/28
Update soon please
Joshbbeer chapter 22 . 3/26
Ruined the book by giving naruto a cursed seal honestly
Guest chapter 33 . 3/25
I hope u fucking drown this story was so cringe good until the harem started
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