|Reviews for Last one standing|
| Smoove chapter 1 . 7/21/2010
I really Liked this story I felt like i was really reading a book it made me imagine everything that happend and it was funny how Natita hid the remote from Richie. Overall I think you should make a real book out of that short story. I got really engaged through the whole time I was reading,I felt like I was in a heavy trance when i was reading. But your really good you should continue to write more!