|Reviews for Doom and Gloom|
| murdercrowther chapter 4 . 5/8/2013
| guest chapter 4 . 3/12/2013
please up date this story is so funny and i want to know whats going to happen next!
| awsmninja chapter 4 . 7/1/2011
i love this story! pleasepleaseplease update soon!
| branmandola chapter 4 . 5/10/2011
Stork dates the most evil girl in the world, well he's doomed
| Silvermoon34 chapter 4 . 2/13/2011
Wow. WTF happens next? UPDATE! For the love of god! I mean, that pairing may TOTALLY creep me out, and I agree, You do have mind worms. But, don't leave that FREAKING cliffhanger there.
| Silvermoon34 chapter 3 . 2/13/2011
*dies from laughter*
| Daemon RISEN chapter 4 . 7/1/2010
I deem this fanfiction...
AWESOME! MORE! MOARRRR!
| Night-Beyond-Reality chapter 1 . 4/23/2010
Ha, Great job!
Love how you discribed Master Cyclonis!
| I cant be bothered logging in chapter 4 . 12/28/2009
Poor Stork XD
| TalonXViolin chapter 4 . 12/12/2009
I read Flowers for Algernon - such a sad story. I love how Stork's mind swiveled in this. And he enjoyed Sky surfing? Mind worms indeed! Actually it's weird to imagine either of them surfing. Hang ten dudes!
| Rocky Rooster chapter 4 . 12/12/2009
I like this story so far, I think you did both Stork's and Cyclonis's thoughts and reasonings very well.
| Archon chapter 4 . 12/11/2009
I've spent some time checking through your storie for something to improve on, but apart from the OTT use of mindworms(although you have them, which I suggest submerging your head in soapy water for five minutes every day till the symptons dissapear) there is NOTHING I can comment on in a negative sense!
to sum it up in one word...
because there are still things in this world that have unfortunatly out awesomed your work, like Master Cyclonis herself. And stork.
| TalonXViolin chapter 3 . 11/23/2009
Lol, I loved it when Cyclonis was describing her surbordinates.
"..the Dark Ace. Egomaniac, narcissist, braggart, shameless liar and manipulator—all qualities that I could respect, of course, if he had the skills to back them up"
Perfect. Cyclonis started acting a little OOC near the end but I guess that hormones for you.
| she who must not be named chapter 3 . 11/23/2009
Oh no, poor Stork... sky surfing? Poor Stork...
ANYways, it's good, and I think you're right thinking that no one REALLY appreciates what Cyclonis does for Cyclonis... except, MAYBE Dark Ace... but I think he falls short.
| TalonXViolin chapter 2 . 11/17/2009
I like so far. Your Cyclonis POV is especially cold- which is good considering it's Cyclonis. I guess Stork is going to be be portayed in a much darker light though too. I'm curious as to how you'll make this work out. I'm surprised Piper was fooled so easily.