|Reviews for What I Really Meant To Say|
| Tnlentz1 chapter 1 . 12/2/2009
Very well written. A Happy ending is nice but I think she needs to work for it...Have someone surprising save her...like alice going to check on her after emmett calls...but I wouldn't make her happy ever after be with edward...someone else...maybe jaspers since he got the whole feeling thing going on...
I truely enjoyed your story...and hate to see see it end this way...
| dijurido chapter 1 . 11/24/2009
Wow this was such an emotional rollercoaster! Loved it!
| MeowVemulapalli chapter 1 . 11/21/2009
K...I was on vacation when this one got posted! But I had already read it.
Awesome! Amazing! Loved it! Laughed because there was REAL cussing in it! ;)
The dirt I have on you is SO deep...but I love your writing! A skill I do NOT possess...but love to help you critique your stuff!
| Unpublished Author chapter 1 . 11/16/2009
I luv this story. The ending, while sad, is fitting. It really is a brilliant ending. Pls dont change it. If u do, make it a new story. Keep this one. It really rocks
| lovbg8898 chapter 1 . 11/15/2009
deffinity needs an HEA
| ElCullen chapter 1 . 11/15/2009
I think that you should definitely turn this into a story! Please don't make Bella die! And you should certainly bring Edward back to her!
| Edwardcarzygirl101 chapter 1 . 11/14/2009
love it can u please write more please add to it
| dispatchangel911 chapter 1 . 11/13/2009
This so needs a HEA. Too sad.
| kaidyn chapter 1 . 11/11/2009
This is really good, it may be morbid but i like how it ends in a note of uncertainty, does she die or is she found on time? A nice HEA would tie it up nicely.
| mummyanimal chapter 1 . 11/11/2009
Amazing story. SO diferent but bloody brilliant none the less but.. please write an EPOV i wanna know how he acts when he gets that letter if he does etc PLEASE? pretty please with a cherry on top lol x
| Hungry Pie chapter 1 . 11/10/2009
HEA please and thank you! :-)
| LoveOTH1000 chapter 1 . 11/10/2009
this was really good...now im not sure what HEA means but im assuming it has to do with a multi-chaptered story. i would enjoy that but maybe you could do a follow up chapter where Edward finds out about bella's death and you write about how he feels about that...but great story! i love reading stories where maybe there isnt a happy ending but where the M of the story isnt just sex but complex emotions. Keep writing
| Silent Tear x chapter 1 . 11/10/2009
I loved this story. Well done :D and good luck
| nadenan chapter 1 . 11/10/2009
that was so evil...100 reviews?...that would take like a month or more
| nanigibbo chapter 1 . 11/10/2009
Very well done - this story could have some real potential if you do decide to expand past the one shot. I hope you do!