Reviews for Complete Hack
trecebo chapter 1 . 1/9/2010
Wow. That was...something.

Putting aside my dislike of tween/teen smart alecs, I give you props for having him go to Gibbs. I see potential there.

However, keep this in mind: Gibbs doesn't hire idiots. DiNozzo, while seeming the jester, is a very intuitive detective.

Also, you have Gen. Abernathy in a comma. Those are quite small and involved in grammar. Coma is good.

Not flaming, just giving solid crit. Enjoy your writing.
BoogiepopShippuden chapter 1 . 11/14/2009
Wow, that was even cooler than I expected. I like Abby, she's funny and you captured her quite well.

I hope you do continue this when you get the chance