|Reviews for Complete Hack|
| trecebo chapter 1 . 1/9/2010
Wow. That was...something.
Putting aside my dislike of tween/teen smart alecs, I give you props for having him go to Gibbs. I see potential there.
However, keep this in mind: Gibbs doesn't hire idiots. DiNozzo, while seeming the jester, is a very intuitive detective.
Also, you have Gen. Abernathy in a comma. Those are quite small and involved in grammar. Coma is good.
Not flaming, just giving solid crit. Enjoy your writing.
| BoogiepopShippuden chapter 1 . 11/14/2009
Wow, that was even cooler than I expected. I like Abby, she's funny and you captured her quite well.
I hope you do continue this when you get the chance