|Reviews for Dinobot's Mate hunting!|
| awesome optimus chapter 5 . 9/20/2013
Hehe... I always did like to read a grimlock/optimus pairing love and mpreg. More chapters please!
| Fangthehedgewolf chapter 1 . 8/29/2013
Oh, boy. We're in trouble now
| Optimus' girl chapter 5 . 1/25/2013
OMP! It has been almost another two years since you have last used dated your wonderful story! I have been waiting for a very LONG time for the next few chapters.
When are Optimus, Prowl, Starscream, and Skywarp going to have their sparklings? I just can't wait for all four them to have their sparklings!
Have you thought of adding your stories on AO3-Transformers? I would just LOVE to read your stories on this site! There are so many really AWESOME stories on this site!
Keep up the AWESOME work with your stories!
| Sammywolfstar chapter 5 . 1/13/2013
WHAT THE FRAG DID MEGAJERK DID TO SKYWARP, IF HE SO MUCH HURTS I'M GOING TO KILL HIM PAINFULLY AND SLOWLY!
| the ed man chapter 2 . 11/2/2012
OK, but giving the transformers penises! The merging of sparks was fine, but yeesh!
| Wrath of an Aero chapter 5 . 10/19/2012
Interesting. I've read through this story you have so far, and I must say there's a improvement between this chapter and the rest, writing and grammar wise. You've caught my eye with this story, I sincerely hope to see more of it.
I found many misspells in the past four chapters, enough to make me slightly annoyed, but I kept from doing so since I found this story unique, and that I've done that before as well. There were a few points I got confused on the Point of View by the way you used your diction. I do recommend a Beta Reader to help you with catching mistakes, or you could read over what you have written a couple times, and check for those little things: spelling, grammar, punctuation. Overall, I'm glad that you kept the characters to their own personalities and not making them OOC, which I was ALMOST expecting, but good for you changing my opinion! Well done! I did have a good laugh when Bumblebee and Bulkhead appeared on scene with nurse costumes on XD nice.
Anyways, this is a great story! I think it has a good future chapter wise, and I really do hope you continue.
Wrath of an Aerow (too lazy to log in herpaderp)
| Dinogirl chapter 1 . 9/24/2012
Oooh. Swoop and Prowl huh? Well darnit you beat me to it! Either that or Swoop and Starscream. Ahh. Dinobot shipping is so much fun!
| Naughtia chapter 5 . 8/26/2012
Please update soon! This is an awesome story!
| Guest chapter 5 . 8/3/2012
nice chapter! please update soon. :)
| BBgal1 chapter 5 . 5/19/2012
Really good story! Please update again ASAP!
| Transformers' BABY chapter 5 . 10/8/2011
| SlytherinSoul14 chapter 1 . 10/7/2011
| SlipknotGhidorah chapter 5 . 8/20/2011
Wow! First Optimus, Prowl, and Starscream were the Dinobot's mates, and now Skywarp is Megatron's mate! I imagine something like this happening:
(after Skywarp and Megatron got to Dinobot Island...)
Starscream: First Optimus, Prowl, and I were kidnapped and impregnated by the Dinobots, and now my cowardly clone is Megatron's sparkmate with a sparkling? WHAT IS WRONG WITH THIS PLANET?
Yeah, I imagine something crazy like that occurring.
| SlipknotGhidorah chapter 4 . 8/20/2011
Heh, I don't know what's funnier...Optimus, Prowl, and Starscream naked, or Bumblebee and Bulkhead dressed up like nurses.
| Optimus' girl chapter 5 . 8/19/2011
It has been a very LONG time since you last updated your story! When do you plan to update your AWESOME story? I just LOVE the idea of Ratchet making Bulkhead and Bee wear nursebot outfits! I just can't stop thinking of Bulkhead and Bumblebee wearing nursebot outfits! I just LOVE the idea of Ratchet making the two be his helpers! I just can't wait for Optimus, Prowl, and Starscream to have their sparklings! PLEASE update before I go crazy! I just miss reading new chapters from this AWESOME story of yours! I just LOVE reading your new Optimus story! I just can't wait to read the next new chapter!