|Reviews for A Sudden Focus|
| MaliciaRoxasSasuke chapter 1 . 8/20/2011
Kyyyyyyyyaaaaaaa ! So great !
| Naiyenne chapter 1 . 11/11/2009
I like it, really. Yuffie's just being Yuffie again.
I was a little like herwhen I was young (at least my best friend says it, and she always says what she's thinking, so I guess she's right).
Anyway, I REALLY, REALLY like it. Well done.
| Suicidal Muffin-chan chapter 1 . 11/10/2009
It's just so cute and sweet that it makes me want to cry! X3
The only constructive criticism I can think to offer:
1.) There were a couple places that read awkwardly; maybe try reading aloud? That usually helps to rephrase/reword.
2.) The little breaks where it would switch the focus from Leon to Cloud to Leon kinda made it seem a little choppy to me. It didn't really hurt anything, but I'm of the opinion that breaks to switch focuses are unnecessary in third-person POV. But that could just be me being picky~ XD
Like I said, very nicely done. :3 I enjoyed it a lot!
| NinjaSheik chapter 1 . 11/9/2009
THAT WAS TOTALLY AWESOME~! BELIEVE IT~! AWESOME~! KYAA~! KYAA~!