cries ugly tears of happiness...
Love that you made this from his pov... so good. I love him, but you knew that already.
And yes, a spin-off for Alazar would be much to my liking! Love how he loves their relationship and helps to keep them from arguing.
Also - had a few good laughs at Edward interacting with the "little drunk" Lmao!
Girl - your stories are all unique and made with love and creativity.
I hope and wish that you will soon have the spirit and the time and inspiration to give
your talent space to live and breathe and expand.
xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxox

what a glorious chapter - all the feelz!
Couldn't read it on my phone (came up blank), but I remembered my kindle and now here on my PC it is all there... glitch.
However, girl! Those monster chapters with tons of action and different characters all at once - I cannot even fathom what kind of energy you needed to this!
I'm dreading the Epi, cause that means it's really over now... these characters stay with me during the day and I used to be so elated to know that there are more chapters waiting for me.
so now, after this last chapter is left only... sniff... I know at least you will give them a good life together and the family they now have.

Girl! Action packed love stories are becoming my favorite! Being sandwiched by Edward and Azar sounds quite delicious right now! Bwahahah!
Anxious to see where you're taking this next!

I had a feeling all along. But why is isn't it more obvious? The boy on the pic has the eyes, the hair...although, life was hard and he changed a lot.
Rose and Paul! Yass!

That was intense and so very satisfying.
Rose and Paul? Why not? Lol. He did good, considering all the circumstances.
Emmett needs to learn a lesson or two.

Wow! I feel like Bruce Willis now, dirty wife beater, cut up feet and bloody...bawahahah! What a chase!
Edward with tears of relief - so moving!
That was awesome!

Finally! Sigh...
I was wondering about her welts and how she was under that dress. Did she get some of the Berry with her coffee? Lol..
What a relief to finally be reunited!
Thank you!

I was about to ask about Aro and why he backed off for so long! And there he is, creepy as ever.
Thank you for Azar still being around!
Another great, actionfilled chapter!

What a commotion and unfortunately a fail at escaping and another fail at ending Aro. So Jasper is up and out for revenge!
Good news at least.
You better not get Azar hurt or I might take it personal. He's mine now! Lol!

Wow...Eleazar... .
I could get used to his kind of attention for as long as Edward isn't around...*evil laugh*.
And yes, fuck Aro! Can't wait for him to get his! Revenge will be delicious!

Yesss...undercover-Bella!
I hope they found Edward and kept him in their pool forever and he's brand new by the time Bella will strike from the inside and end Aro and Charlie!

Can't believe they left the bullets in the ivories! Aro must be very sure of his effect on people in order to give her a sense of power like that. You could've let her shoot some more at Charlie...just for fun! Lol!

Hell no! He can't be dead. I am! I feel the blood loss and agony and I should be up and getting stuff done, instead I'm starting the next chapter now! It's a holiday, for crying out loud, and I neeeed to keep reading!

Another thriller!
I loooove funny, playful, teasing Eddie!("I knew you were a dork!") Lol! And yes...I know exactly what a spatula in the hands of a man can do to you! Hahah!
And yes ..she can be sexy too and don't judge me for also getting lady boners from their sexy, crazy skills and supercoolness! I adore them!

So much grief and heartache, scumbag parents! What greed is bringing out in people!
But they have each other now.
And yes - I'm also in love with your character, lol!
And rest assured- your lemonade is yayyy, never meh! It's delicious and so very satisfying! XOXOXOXOXOX