Reviews for The Unforgiving aka Betrayed
manticore-gurl071134 chapter 2 . 7/10/2012
great little fic :D
TiaKisu chapter 2 . 5/18/2011
Oh my God, I'm so very sorry I stopped by so late! I didn't get to check on fanfic-net lately and thus missed your update. Really, I'm so sorry 'bout that. :o(

But, to get to the review: First of all I'm so happy you chose to complete this little piece. The idea of Maeve using Bryn to watch what happened is a very interesting one - and it's well worth to be elaborated. Talking about that, I gotta say that it would be very cool if maybe on day you'd even continue this one and write about how Sinbad finds Maeve. ;D

Another thing I liked was the dreamland - idea. And though it's not all brand new in the fandom, you did use it in a very nice way that made reading your story very enjoyable. All the more since you let it have a happy ending - at least for now. o

And FINALLY Sinbad told Maeve how he really feels about her. It was high time he did, really.

All in all a very nice short-story that would make a great starting-point for sequel. Keep on writing, dear.


TK ;o)
TiaKisu chapter 1 . 11/11/2009
Interesting start, Yennifer. So Maeve watched the crew through Bryn? Nice twist. Now, am wondering if Sinbad and Maeve can overcome this loss of trust. Write on. :)
Modestus chapter 1 . 11/10/2009
Oh, Maeve. *shakes head* You'll never change.

Anyway, nice story but sad ending.