|Reviews for Unfinished Business|
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/23/2012
Great story you caught the feel of Gideon trying to move on a sequel would be good
| Rosajean chapter 1 . 2/21/2011
aww! I really liked this!
| flashpenguin chapter 1 . 3/6/2010
In a word: Incredible!
You managed to catch the depression, sadness, and defeat of both characters and stay true to who and what they are. I could literally feel Jason's angst as he struggled to believe-WANTING to believe-that happiness could be grasped with both hands. Okay, it wasn't "fluff" but it was a love story based on friendship. And that trumps "fluff" every time.
| LoveforPenandDerek chapter 1 . 12/30/2009
The last line made for a great ending
| SweetButterflyKisses chapter 1 . 11/11/2009
Awesome,i miss Elle :( I really liked how every feeling was it!