|Reviews for Precious Time|
| youngandmature chapter 1 . 11/13/2011
Just read this and cried so much.
It was gutwrenching.
Please - you have to tell me, what was Rosalie's motive for killing Bella? Was Bella happy to be reuniting with Edward? Had she been about to move to Chicago?
| honeyimhom chapter 1 . 11/9/2011
great story...I wish it was a full story.
| shonla chapter 1 . 6/1/2010
| mudpuddledemon chapter 1 . 4/30/2010
Twistedly, horribly fantastic. It feels a bit unfinished to me. I know we can theoretically arrange the presented pieces ourselves to finish the story, but I'm lost on Rosalie's possible motive.
| Emily chapter 1 . 2/24/2010
It was rosalie how killed Bella wasnt it? Good luck with the contest.
| ShouldHaveStuckToReading chapter 1 . 11/18/2009
You write so well, DA! Edward's pain was palpable. Good luck in the contest!
| susanpr chapter 1 . 11/15/2009
Wow great story. I want to know more. Why would rosalie kill Bella? How does edward deal with being a father? Please continue this
| Carlisle's Little Girl chapter 1 . 11/12/2009
It was Rosalie! She hit Bella in the spine with a stilletto and had her hair in a pony tailnso it wouldn't fall out, but a couple strands did! Oh I love this!
| Corinne 22 chapter 1 . 11/12/2009
I have to say, that was written really well. I liked the way that you came up with small details or the way that you explained things. You thought of little things that I normally don't think about. Some things were explained like a poem. Really good with words. (HAHA I just sounded a bit like Forrest saying that, esp. compared to what you just wrote.)
Once the calls weren't being answered I just freaking knew it would be her. Despite knowing, it still got to me. How could it not with two little babies? Not one but two! It would crush me if I was Edward. Imagine having to have to go through that. I honestly don't want to fully think about how that would feel :(
What the fucking hell was Rose doing? Why did she do it? Explain woman! Explain! I can track you down...don't think I can't...
I can get all Rose on your ass haha
| Seductive Illusions chapter 1 . 11/11/2009
oh my gosh...
very well written! wow. it was kind of obvious, at least for me, it was bella, but that doesn't make this story any less amazing! keep up the good work! this is amazing!
| Abby-sade chapter 1 . 11/10/2009
wow, that was really good! I hope you win, to say the least!
| mopstyle chapter 1 . 11/10/2009
Gah! Kill me with your words, bb! Cry, cry, cry.
What a whore! Why would she do that? Well done, love! The panic and heartbreak are palpable. I love it! mwah!