Hey! I just found this fic because I read Written in Sand and enjoyed it that I wanted to see if you had possibly written a sequel. Much to my delight, you had. Much to my disappointment, it's not finished. I thought the first story was good! I love stories about Jacob/Selmak. Just wondering if you were ever going to update/finish.

Darn, I was really hoping she'd blow him a kiss or flip him off or something. Still, can't wait for more!

as a fanfic author who's also writing about elves allying themselves with the SGC (we xchanged story comments once via mail once if u recall), love your story premise

glad to see u continuin w/ the story

glad to finally read the chapter where the Carters meetup w/ these tech.-advanced elves..can't wait to actually meet them hopefully in ur next chapter

I like this. Was starting to wonder if the story was ever going to get to this stage. :) Glad to see you ack to writing.

Great chapter. Keep up the good work.

great story

look forward to seing the new race might they be the Furling [elves]? alfheim German for elves, some theoerize Furling to be elves. I've written, continuin to on a SG-1 fanfic involvin elves.

My condolences on ur Dad passing. Having lost mine, I can relate. Thoughtful of u to mention ur Dad in ur dedications.

I'm now thinkin bout doin the same in one o my stories, which is fitting b/c he loved watchin Stargate SG-1.

Oh, poor Maria! Hope Sam figures out what's going on or someone finds her somehow!

i love it. i can't wait for the next chapter! Hurry so i can see what happens next!

UPDATE SOON!

My condolences. Keep up the good work.

Well that's an interesting start. And I'm glad that NID goon didn't decide to go off on his own and do something to Maria. Take your time, I'm willing to wait for more. Make the story as long or short as you think it needs to be.

Great start. Keep up the good work.