|Reviews for Slayers: Darkness|
| Jenmoon1 chapter 1 . 2/5/2011
| Gerao-A chapter 10 . 1/10/2010
Sunny: we are back.
Ramon: and this chapter was a bit much bigger
| Gerao-A chapter 8 . 12/11/2009
Maliska: wow, now this sounded like a ghost story.
Ramon: you were right, what a twist!
Sunny: and we never saw chicken Robot.
| Gerao-A chapter 7 . 12/2/2009
Sunny: hum...the Dolph girl seems quite suspecious to me
Air Jay: HEY YO! WHERE IS MY DEAR SWEET NAGA!
Alandra SHUT UP AIR JAY!
| Gerao-A chapter 6 . 11/27/2009
Sunny: its a secret, it is always a secret with that moron Xellos!
Alandra: so far so good, but you are update the chapters too quickly.
Ramon: insted of updating them once every two days or so you should try updating them once a week, that is what we do, that way we make bigger chapters
| Dragon Slave chapter 5 . 11/24/2009
Bloody hell... the chapters are so small
make bigger chapters old boy
| Gerao-A chapter 5 . 11/23/2009
Maliska: I was kind of especing that Gourry would overreact by dressing up like a girl, again.
Alandra: well, at leats in the new seasons he did not had to do it.
Ramon: cool so far but the chapters are a bit small, aren't they?
| Gerao-A chapter 4 . 11/21/2009
Maliska: Zel is here, only Pokota is left. or maybe Naga
Ramon: Oh no, don't make the boys dress as girls!
Sunny: yes do!
Alandra: this is gonna be fun
| Gerao-A chapter 3 . 11/21/2009
Alandra: now this chapter we really love it!
Ramon: it would be fun if Gourry and Fiia got toghter.
Sunny: Ramon! you started to sound like Air Jay!
Ramon: say what?
Maliska: now Amelia is on the game, only Zel is left!
| Gerao-A chapter 2 . 11/21/2009
Maliska: AHAHHAHAAH! I can't believe that Filia made Xellos do all the work.
Ramon: now that Filia is in the game, who is next?
| Gerao-A chapter 1 . 11/21/2009
Ramon: well, our first impression on this chapter is that it is quite small, you should try to make bigger chapters.
Sunny: but now that Xelos apears it obvious means that something big is coming up
| Leafwhistler chapter 2 . 11/13/2009
I rather like the idea of Xelloss covered in clay. And helping in the shop. Sounds like Lina is rubbing off n everyone. It was also intresting to see Xelloss propose to Phil how monsters were working for the good of humanity.
You have some interesting ideas when it comes to bargaining. And propehcies are always great fun.
I agree with cyberimp about polishing your phrases, but the story still has its own charm. And you get the point across quite clearly. Both of which are the most important. I look forward to hearing more soon:) Keep feeding those plot bunnies.
| cyberimp6 chapter 1 . 11/10/2009
Off to a very intriguing start. IMHO the dialogue could use a little polishing. (For example, instead of "Xellos please don’t try to help me.", Luna could say "Xellos, you'd be well advised to stay out of this.") But I rather think that Xellos will be involved after all, because of "dragon and demon walking for peace" . . .