I hope you write more! I really want to know what Jondy does (even though I have an idea) and I think you should hook Zach up with someone...maybe an X-5 from another unit?

man what could be going on with jondy why wont she talk about it who will jondy choose to have a realationship with krit or zack
these are just some of the questions that i need you to answer in up coming chapters which i hope you will consider adding to you story
please i hope that you do end up adding to this great story of yours

I like your story, keep on writing

I have only 3 words 'bout this story : I LOVED IT! So, update soon, 'kay?

I really like this story a lot. I wouldn't change a thing if I were you.

The only thing I would add would be to the summary. You should put that Max & Logan are in it. The reason is - the shippers are all so depressed right now & most of them are only reading Max & Logan stories.

You would be doing them a big favor & you'd get more good reviews.

Thanks for your good writing.

I really like this story a lot. I wouldn't change a thing if I were you.

The only thing I would add would be to the summary. You should put that Max & Logan are in it. The reason is - the shippers are all so depressed right now & most of them are only reading Max & Logan stories.

You would be doing them a big favor & you'd get more good reviews.

Thanks for your good writing.

Borg has been buggin' many people by saying they are bad writers, so, don't care 'bout him!

Just to let you know, the same day you got a mean review from Borg so did I and many others on the Just In page. I don't even think he read out stories, judging by the fact that he just reviewed all the "just ins" in a row. So don't be sad! :)

Also, awesome story! I'm really enjoying it. And yay, you have flashbacks- I love flashbacks, as anyone who's read my stories knows! :D

Anyway, great fic and keep it up! I can't wait for Max & Zack's talk!

Ah, just ignore 'Borg', he sounds like he's trying to be a real prick, if he doesn't like the story, fine then, he should stop reading it, problem solved.

Personally, I think it's a pretty good go

More Jondy fic! I've been feeling deprived! This is good. (And Borg, if you hate it so much why read it?) Anyway, this rox and I hope you update soon. And I hope you resolve the situation between Krit and Jondy really soon!

hey! i hope you continue soon, and get over your writer's block!...um, i'm Aussie too, and I'm very DA-deprived. Soz, I have no idea of the bar name...hmmm...for songs...hmm...is this a jondy/zack fic? or jondy/krit? i can't really think of a song til i know that...but plz continue soon!~ luv jaz

Don't listen to borg. He/she is just trying to be a complete $$hole. This is much better than my first story and if it was as bad as borg says it is then he/she wouldn't keep coming back to review. I like your story.

Bar-Spiral

Roomate-I believe that you said that her roomate was a guy so I would say maybe Chase

Jondy's friends-Madison, Graciela, Ali, and Cristolyn.

I hope that that helps you because i can't wait to read more!

the pefict song to go with this story would be pink's don't let me get me

Hey, great story!

Bar- Fusion

Roommate- Jules, Teri or Marissa

Song- No More Drama(Mary J. Blige), Your House(Alanis Morrisette), Mary Jane(Alanis Morrisette).

Those are my suggestions! I hope that I was some help to you...

-Jessica (Sphynx Lynx)

You're doing really great, especially for a first time writer. Keep up the good work.