|Reviews for Something Wicked This Way Comes|
| hga chapter 17 . 3/6
Very nicely done, especially the wind down meal afterwords, with, as you noted, Albus doing the right thing as we'd expect Mr. Greatest Good to do.
| faltrock chapter 48 . 3/6
Really great story!
I had never heard of Disgaea before stumbling on this fic, but I instantly fell in love. (The prinnies, dood!)
Bridging the demon dimensions and HP universe with Narnia's multiverse is a perfect fit. And the Silent Hill quest, man, I think it makes this one of my favourite stories ever.
(And maybe there can be a sequel with Lillith's and Rigel's Hogwarts years?)
| Robin42069 chapter 48 . 3/3
| thelegendarysupernerd chapter 12 . 2/14
You've done a great deal of analysis regarding the books, and I appreciate that. You should know that this is my third or fourth, or is it fifth or sixth? Anyway it doesn't matter. I have read this fic a number of times, and am reading it again because I can't find anything good that I haven't read. It has hit the point of a story that I have read enough that I know exactly what is going to happen, but I read it again anyway, because it is just that good. I give you highest marks for this absolutely fantastically spun tale.
| thelegendarysupernerd chapter 7 . 2/14
Hermione, inarticulate? What?
| thelegendarysupernerd chapter 6 . 2/14
Hermione Granger went to war. Makes me think of the poem in Doctor Who, When a Good Man goes to War. Don't piss off the nice people, because when you do, they are scary as all hell.
| Weretiger Marduk chapter 48 . 2/12
Damn fine story. Not having ever played Disgaeia, I had to google a bit here and there, but the story was fantastic. The Silent Hill stream was creepy as fuck, I had to stay up all night and finish reading the story (yes, I read it all in one night) because my house was creepy and dark. Fantastic concept of scale, though the only fights that really had me on the edge were the ones in SH and against King Krev. Gotta have a villain that challenges the heroes. But again, all told, a great piece.
| Secca Irises chapter 25 . 2/9
Dobermens are actually very intelligent and gentle dogs. They are used in hollywood due to the tradition of clipping their ears, granting that fierce look, and how trainable they are. As with most dogs, the only way to get a cruel dog is to raise it cruely. I believe this is true of pitt bulls as well, though I have only met dogs raised by others. I have raised three dobermans, and all three didn't understand the concept of harming anyone. They'd much rather lick you and get scratches and, oddly, carrots.
I realize most people haven't had
| Ryuus2 chapter 47 . 2/7
Oh, I also loved Alessa, Prinny-Lily, every conversation with Sirius (seriously!), how Harry and Albus' relationship evolved, Voldemort's march (that entire scene was mind-bogglingly awesome), and pretty much everything else. I really wish there were more stories of this quality, and for Disgaea in general, on this site.
Keep up the great work!
| Ryuus2 chapter 48 . 2/7
This. Was. Awesome. No, wait, not a strong enough word. Awesomtastic. Still not good enough. Awesomtasticazing! There we go. Now that is an appropriately good word to describe this awesometasticazing story. It had everything: action, adventure, drama, horror, sex, love, hate, revenge, Narnia, actual plot twists, character development, a great musical score, a serious distaste for fanon, and above all else...excellent spelling and grammar! Seriously, too many stories out there have such good catches but such bad grammar that reading them makes your eyes bleed. I tip my hat (which is also awesometasticazing) to you, Kyouzou, Luan Mao, and anyone else who helped you with this story.
I keep trying to find a way, some way, that this could have ended differently, and the only thing I can come up with is Harry killing Krichevskoy, thus becoming an Overlord and able to open his own dimensional portals. But even I think that's overkill, and would have been less fun than how things did turn out.
Hermione and Luna & Harry and Etna's relationships were very interesting to watch develop. Pairing up anyone in the HP universe is freaking impossible if you want to make it stable, believable, and or healthy. Hermione and Ginny are both like sisters to Harry, Cho is a very bad idea, every other girl in the school (but Luna) has no definable character, and the boys (if one were to be into that) aren't much better matches. The entire situation is a nightmare!
I really liked how you portrayed Narcissa. It's not often I get to see her for the Lady Black she was raised to be instead of simply being Mrs. Malfoy.
Lucius's punishment and summary fate were squick. I will say no more and refuse to think about it.
Keep up the great work!
| Sdarian chapter 48 . 2/3
Nice. I didn't particularly care for how you had the King act, nor how well Harry did when fighting him, but that's a pretty minor thing overall.
I enjoyed reading this story. I hope any other stories you write are just as enjoyable. Good luck!
| Sdarian chapter 31 . 2/3
That's too bad. I liked this Amelia.
| Opinr chapter 48 . 1/31
| Sdarian chapter 14 . 2/2
This doesn't make a lot of sense to me. For one, she's known him less then a year, and I really don't think that is long enough for her to be thinking about sacrificing her life for him. The other, and far more important thing though, is that from what I remember of the seal's conditions if Etna dies - regardless of if she is doing it to save his life - then Harry dies anyway as that is how the seal is set up. That was the whole reason that Dumbledore refrained from attempting to kill or banish Etna in the first place.
| Sdarian chapter 8 . 2/2