|Reviews for Black Dawn|
| DJinTheHOUse chapter 8 . 6/24
i once read 25 chapters before the main characters had sex.
| DJinTheHOUse chapter 6 . 6/24
when you mentioned how a lot of authors have rape in their story, you are right, but if you think about it when you start getting into stories that the main character is raped, you feel so sad, and emotional, and it makes you feel so much emotions for the character(most of the time), and the thing about hating bella, i dont hate her, usually she is hated in most stories, but what i have put into my little fanfiction bible is that don't let other stories make you bias(i didn't hate her until i read fanfiction, but i was a teen, know i don
t really care). But i have read a few stories, were bella is a good character.
| domsijohn chapter 3 . 5/26
Agree Dimitri Felix would have been betterfor harry
| domsijohn chapter 2 . 5/26
Amazing love how Marcus is over protective
| domsijohn chapter 1 . 5/26
| Guest chapter 17 . 4/16
I liked the first half of the story, but I didn't quite care for how the second half went.
| Guest chapter 17 . 3/17
please make one where its submissive harry x dominant caius and the volturi love him and harry is cold hearted towards others except for caius...or somethink like that oh and he also hating the cullens
| Lucy chapter 6 . 3/10
I no who it is jake tell me im wrong u can unless u r going to lie
| Guest chapter 10 . 2/15
The gifts are so cute!
| claire1663 chapter 17 . 1/26
thank you for this fic.
all the best
| asiya halima kone chapter 17 . 1/22
very good story thank you :) I enjoyed so much it was such a good read thank you :)
| 23DrarryIsLove22 chapter 5 . 1/2
Your Harry is so immature. Your reason to Harry's childish antics makes little sense.
& blood for tears honestly? He must be hungry 24/7 then considering how much you make him cry.
Harry is my favourite character but I'm not liking him at all here.
| Arwenien chapter 6 . 12/14/2015
Um, it's bad. I can't imagine Edward saying "wanna" or "gonna", lol xD Most of your characters speak like teenagers, even when they aren't that young. And sadly, they have only two similar things with the oryginal characters: name and being vampire/wizard/human. I don't appreciate twisting oryginal universe that way. Overall, I have a lot more negative things to say about this story, because it's the worst HP/Twilight crossover I've read so far, but I think it's pointless. Your story is finished and there'll always be people who like even a completely crap, because it's entertaining in some way (in most cases author only need to add lots of sex and bashing good characters). They like it, I don't, end of story.
| rowenasheir chapter 8 . 11/30/2015
No wonder the Volturi locked harry up to keep him out of trouble!
| rowenasheir chapter 6 . 11/30/2015
Is it Jacob -Draco would need an alpha to settle him down and he would never settle for second best!