|Reviews for Crossroads II|
| Ekinorev chapter 1 . 7/29
Thank you for this great story. It kept me awake for a few nights. More than 250k words, for me the perfect length when it's about my favorite heroes. I have never enough :)
I love particularly "your" Albert, how he is different when he comes back from Africa, he is more manly, more sensual, more playful, and yet he is the same Albert we love. I had loved the love scenes... Great idea the friendship between Patty and Georges. I would have loved to see it evolve toward love. I think they deserve and I would have been curious to see Georges' mask fall.
Another point, why Albert, so open to the new ideas, and absolutely not conformist, become so jealous of Candy's work and totally conventional when it is about Candy pregnancy?
Well, this, plus the relationship between Patty & Georges, are points I would love to see developed... Sigh...
I wish you all the best in your future projects of writing, and I keep a close watch on it.
| Guest chapter 24 . 4/14
Where are you now, please come back!
| Mar147 chapter 38 . 1/11
I read this sensual story, and found it really enjoyable and exciting.
Will there ever be a continuation, please?
Thanks again for this story and thumbs up!
| Denima chapter 38 . 5/6/2017
Sorry, but I do not know much English. But it did not stop me. I translated your novel completely from beginning to end. I could not stop not reading it and waiting for the continuation. This is a real production, which I want to re-read again and again! I would write a lot, but my English does not allow me this. Thank you very much for writing such a wonderful novel, I'm very glad that I found it.
| pivoine chapter 38 . 3/19/2017
histoire magnifiquement écrite. j'attends la suite s'il y a...
| Louna chapter 38 . 2/17/2017
Très belle histoire qui m'a captivée ça fais plusieurs mois que je l'ai lu ! Aujourd'hui je tiens à commenter la route à été longue avant que Candy rendre son amour à Albert et de reconnaître qu'il est son âme soeur mais enfin l'amour inconditionnel d'Albert à fini par payer,enfin ils sont mariés avec en route un bébé le fruit de leur amour j'ai hâte de lire la suite bonne continuation.
| rosamoviatt chapter 33 . 8/24/2016
what can said! ... just excellent :)
| rosamoviatt chapter 26 . 8/21/2016
what to tell you, that has not been said before captivating ...
| rosamoviatt chapter 27 . 8/21/2016
I think at least one word for a good job pays all the effort so there is: excellent!
| rosamoviatt chapter 22 . 8/18/2016
wowwwww...every part of my body was warm with this chapter, such a way the you describe it led me enjoy the feeling they experienced! Well done goood job ;)
| rosamoviatt chapter 19 . 8/18/2016
ohhh my god beautiful yo make cry! Candy declaration of love was amazing , passionately to make cry ;)
| rosamoviatt chapter 17 . 8/17/2016
Hi, I am RosaL ...well just let me tell you can stop to read your work you really have a gift in your hand! your imagination really do an excellent work , I just catch your story after a read some other stories about candy candy it was really impressed you made me laugh, excited me about the way you telling this story... I hope, after finishing this one, coming more because I really have stuck to it yo you work .
| Fandcya chapter 38 . 6/30/2016
Wow, what a chapter! First fight and a big one! I do have to say I had mix feelings about it. On the one hand, it made me upset to hear Albert being such a macho. But I do have to remember this is early 1900 and things were very different for women back then. But on the other hand, I was like, lucky Candy that has someone who cares so much about her and her future baby that wants her to rest and only take care of herself and baby. Not that she can't do both work, and take care of herself and baby. But still nice to have that option. I am glad they compromised and resolved the problem quickly -fairy tale like.
Now we'll see what comes next!
| Louna chapter 38 . 6/28/2016
j'aime beaucoup votre histoire j'avais déjà lu Crossards 1 et le crossards 2 est génial une très belle histoire ,jai été surpris de lire la mise a jour j'ai du recommencer a partir de du mariage pour être bien dans l'histoire ça fait 2 fois que je la lis entièrement .
je veux connaitre la suite pour le bébé de Candy et Albert et aussi Tom et Fanny n' abandonnées pas cette histoire bonne continuation! une Fans des Antilles Guadeloupe Kimbé Raid!(Courage en Créole).
| Illyria chapter 38 . 6/26/2016
OMG, I just realized I never added a comment like I intended! I could have sworn that I did, after having this chapter read like three times already... forgetful me!
So, here it goes:
What a treat! Finally, after so, so long, I got to read more about their lives. Eagerly, I dove in and….
I thought, after their growing, secret (and therefore, a bit spicy, yummy!) romance, wedding and honeymoon, you will end it on some promising note, sum up and wrap it up nicely, leaving us satisfied but still, weeping silently for such lovely story to be already over. Well, I though, such is life, stories can’t last forever and it’s better to end something while it is still interesting rather than continue it and have it become too ordinary and too boring to read. Well… you disappointed me. You continued, you dare venture into the risky “marriage-doesn’t-have-to-be-boring” ground and you give us, indeed, a slice of somebody's life, something so normal, so ordinary, something not worth writing about, so obvious… written in such gripping and entertaining way! How do you do that? You don’t seem to use any sophisticated vocabulary, you don’t try to charm us with any writer’s wicked tricks – whatever they might be – and yet, we find ourselves unable to turn away from our screens as we breathlessly swallow it, paragraph by paragraph! It just… flows! How do you do that?
Having this said, I would like to add/ask few more things.
1. I’m happy that Albert and Candy are making their marriage work. They are only at the beginning, but - so far so good!
2. I want some spice! More love life, please! You tease us with just a bit and nothing happens!
3. Baby on a way, yay, hurray!
4. But then again, with baby on a way, spice might need to be put on hold….
5. Will we get to see the fixing of the Andrew Mansion?
6. I miss Patty and her storyline! Could you cook some, please, and soon?
7. Oh, and add a tablespoon of Tom and Flammy, to top it up.
Can’t wait. XXX