Reviews for Equal Combat
MissCoppersMom chapter 1 . 4/3/2012
Aaawww that was so cute! Loved it! I know this was a long while ago but I hope you won! Team Edward!
hadiya chapter 1 . 4/15/2010
that was awsome you should have wrote chapters.
BellaLovesEdwardMoreThanJake chapter 1 . 4/13/2010
That was a very interesting story.
Decadent Anarchy chapter 1 . 12/14/2009
I think this was a great read!

It was enjoyable, fun and it had me laughing :D

I really loved this line "you are now my indestructible vampire goddess."

"You know he wanted to test the newborn." This is just so perfectly Emmett!

Thank you Joayla :)
Lady Dragona chapter 1 . 12/10/2009
I love this anniversary idea. Edward finally finds out what it feels like to lose and Bella knows that she is know his equal. Very well done.
hippogriff-tamer chapter 1 . 12/1/2009
I enjoyed seeing Bella and Edward being so relaxed and just having fun especially on their anniversary
bmthespian chapter 1 . 11/16/2009
Cute Bella/Edward story
cinroc chapter 1 . 11/13/2009
That was great. Thanks for sharing it. I really enjoyed your Bella and Edward.
Justine Lark chapter 1 . 11/11/2009
Well, there are a lot of run-on sentences and punctuation errors. But, the idea is really, really cute. I love to see the two of them being playful and relaxed and having fun together. It was a very nice way to spend their anniversary. Thanks for writing this!
alycaly chapter 1 . 11/10/2009
This was a cute story! There were a lot of grammar errors that did distract from the story quite a bit. I also thought the number of times they called each other "baby" was a bit much...kind of out of character. I like the storyline, though!
ebhg chapter 1 . 11/10/2009
Thank you for submitting your entry! I particularly enjoyed the line- "I want you to feel equal… my gift to you is trust."

Good luck in the contest!