|Reviews for Clarence's Story|
| Terra Young chapter 1 . 4/2/2011
| bodiechan chapter 1 . 3/7/2010
so. a very, very long time ago, I think I remember you asking me to read over this and give me your thoughts because you wanted to maybe make a sequel? and being the obnoxious procrastinator I am, I kind of waited like five months to actually read the thing but. AT LEAST I DID IT EVENTUALLY. D even if I don't remember anything about Annie except the basic plot...
Anyway, you are a really good writer. I love what you've done with the characters here, and how you incorporate actual historical events into the story. I also really love the Clarence/Margaret relationship. *w* It's adorable. And the whole thing was really sweet.
one little mistake I may have found?
"Edwin put a hand to Thomas's shoulder. 'It's fine, Jack. Take your time and get it done.'"
who is Thomas?
I think the story is fine as is and wraps itself up pretty well, but if you had an idea for a sequel, that could work too. :D
| Amata le Fay chapter 1 . 12/3/2009
Wonderful, just wonderful. It's a shame nobody pays attention to the Hooverville-ites.