Reviews for Mirage
Guest chapter 38 . 2/12
A really good story well written and enjoyable
I would have liked jake and Leah pardoned though and I didn't get Lawrence's change of heart in the end but otherwise really good thank you
Edward'sDJ chapter 7 . 8/23/2014
About time...
Edward'sDJ chapter 6 . 8/23/2014
How have the public, or at very least the residents of Forks, not recognised them?
Edward'sDJ chapter 4 . 8/23/2014
I'd forgotten about the annoying movie deviations from the book and the low budget stunts...
Edward'sDJ chapter 2 . 8/23/2014
I'm glad I can check future chaps to ensure Edward doesn't cheat on Bella with KStew...
Edward'sDJ chapter 1 . 8/23/2014
Fascinating start.
babesbraves chapter 38 . 5/29/2014
Wow what a truly fantastic story! I was so caught up in the twists & turns, the blinding love that I read from start to finish in one sitting! It's now nearly 04:30 in the morning! Thank you for sharing this epic book with us all.
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 38 . 7/20/2013
that was a great story jus not long enough. I would have loved to read about their time on the island andfeel the love THANK YOU
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 37 . 7/20/2013
if he is pissed because his eyes are red from drinking Bella's blood whats he going to do when he see the bite on Bella's chest where his brother bite her
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 36 . 7/20/2013
wonder what radical methods it is not like they can give him a blood transfusion or something unless he puts him under again and tells him to drink it like telling him to sleep
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 35 . 7/20/2013
yes I greatly enjoyed this story I just want Edward to be ok and put back together as good as before without the monster in his head
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 34 . 7/20/2013
oh god no don't let Edward die this is all Victoria and his brother's fault they should be the ones dying not Edward
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 33 . 7/20/2013
god I hope they are not to late and Edward will be saved
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 32 . 7/20/2013
please let them find and save Edward and get rid of his mean brother
brenda.warren.1257 chapter 31 . 7/20/2013
well Bella clearly knows Edward would never do anything to her like that so what is she thinking why don't they write her a note too
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