Reviews for I'm not in Love
Guest chapter 15 . 3/17
would have been better with a little less content in the bedroom.
Audrey chapter 26 . 12/13/2016
So, I finished your story, and I HATE it. like what kind of names are they(the children's)

JUST KIDDING! I LOVE your story, amazing, and you right about the different ending possibilities. Great job. Also, very good chapter length. I support you. GOOD LUCK on any other fanfiction stories you will right. -An LotR fan
Audrey chapter 4 . 12/10/2016
Hilarious I find this chapter really funny, or at least the end part. I love lord of the rings
Audrey chapter 1 . 12/8/2016
Guest chapter 26 . 8/8/2016
Ew no. She disgusts me. How could she take the right of being at the birth away from Legolas? That is absolutely disgusting. You had a lovely story until she got pissed for literally no reason. It seemed like a cop out of finishing the story. I had way more hopes. But you let me down.
Lisa chapter 3 . 7/25/2016
I'm sorry. Well, actually I am not. in my opinion this story has almost NOTHING to do with the lotr-franchise except for a few books and names. Yeah sure I am only done with the third chapter but I already lost interest reading. Please don't take this as an insult and more as critic. It is just that you focused too much on you OCs and then the reader (who expected lotr) is dissapointed. I am sure others feel the same but maybe do not want to write it, so I just wanted to let you know. I will not continue reading because I do not want to waste my time reading a fanfiction where there may be nothing that I am a fan of. So here is my tip: Do not focuse TOO much on your OCs
Guest chapter 3 . 7/24/2016
Saw I think you did a remarkable job
Guest chapter 2 . 7/23/2016
This chapter was vary intriguing
Guest chapter 1 . 7/23/2016
I think that you have a good story going it keeps me wanting to know more, I hope you continue writing
Guest chapter 26 . 6/16/2016
I this
Guest chapter 4 . 3/17/2016
Erm...I'm not trying to be a know-it-all or anything, butI believe its "lembas" not "lemba" just some friendly, constructive criticism. ;)
Guest chapter 20 . 3/17/2016
Fiera Evenstar chapter 3 . 3/16/2016
That man should have used 'Comment vous-appellez vous?' instead. Use your formality, you fool!
Wonderful chapter, and I love the character reactions. Tres bon! chapter 3 . 1/19/2016
Omg wow. this is amazingggggg chapter 2 . 1/19/2016
Wow! This is an amazing fanfiction that you've wrote! This is really good... No words can describe this! Keep up the good work :D
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