Reviews for The Prince's Game
ScarletBloomSword chapter 5 . 2/7/2014
Not my best pairings but...the story is really good! Just soo perfect.
Pineapple Fairy Queen chapter 5 . 5/2/2013
ASDFGHJKL! tears in my eyes, and i love it! it's so CUTE! I think i might be falling in love with this pairing D: ...scratch that, i AM in love with it! more cuteness adorableness awesomeness updates of love?.. WELLP, time to find the next story to read!
Sakimoto Ritsuko chapter 5 . 3/13/2012
"That's cheesy Ha-chan~ " Lol, favorite line~~ XDD So cute~~~~ /
Sakimoto Ritsuko chapter 4 . 3/13/2012
So cute~ Ha-chan, that's a kawaii nickname~~~
Sakimoto Ritsuko chapter 3 . 3/13/2012
More B59 please! .
Mitsu Himitsu chapter 5 . 5/30/2011
Hello. I read your story because I love B59.

But, um, I have to say that this story was kind of... hard to read. o3o Or chapters 1-4 at least. The way you write is just overall pretty hard to understand. I couldn't really get my head wrapped around some things. I also have to say that reading the ending of chapter four was a little like running into a brick wall. It happened very suddenly. o_o If I were you, I'd try to read over and do editing when you finish a chapter. You should work on making your sentences flow better.

Bel's characterization was good overall. Gokudera was kind of iffy in places. Like, I would've liked to see him more protective of Tsuna, and frankly, I don't think he'd be that easy when it came to Bel. xD Also, I would've liked to see him take a more affirmative action with Bel killing all those people in the last chapter, other than just standing there, letting Bel stab him... o_o

However, I will say that I enjoyed the "bonus chapter" (even though I think it would've been better as a one shot apart from the story). It was much clearer to understand, just a little weird in some places. Like I said, the best thing you can do for that is to read over and edit things. Be careful of your phrasing. Also, I say that it should've been its own one shot because I honestly didn't see how it related to the story at all... xD

By the way, I really loved the ending of the bonus chapter, when Gokudera said he talked to his mom. I found it making so much sense, since I was kind of mad that she would try to make him do such a thing... :D

All in all, I thought the bonus chapter stood out from the rest of the story in a very good way. I hope this review helped.


HaPpY bAcKwArDs chapter 3 . 5/3/2011
showdown! :D
HaPpY bAcKwArDs chapter 2 . 5/3/2011
claps for Mammons appearence? Just me? lol i feel bad for poor Hayato... Gokudere!
HaPpY bAcKwArDs chapter 1 . 5/3/2011
i somehow knew it was Tsuna D:
Hayato Migikata chapter 5 . 11/11/2010

a pairing based on my 2 fav character 3

i was fangirling all around reading this!


i wanna see more Bel x Goku from you ヽ(u*)ノ
Ominous Rain chapter 5 . 11/5/2010
awwww you put up a bonus chapter!:) so sweet!
Coffeespill chapter 4 . 7/14/2010
Kyahhhh!*Nosebleed* Awesome!
Kienai chapter 4 . 4/15/2010
I love it 3 is not easy for me read this, because i dont speak english (xD i speak spanish) but, i try to understand, and i like the history an the "belphegor's game" is very funny x3 well, is it sinish in the chapter 4 the end is good, but i want more chapters! I want to know waht is going to do Gokudera net to the night with Bel *O* im waiting for a new chpter or a new history, god job!

Ciao ciao~(and sorry, i dont speak very well XD)
k1w11 chapter 4 . 2/13/2010
this is awesome!

i love this story!

OMG..i love this pairing and i love the way you describe them.

freakin awesome. please write more B59 in the future..i would kill for more...hahaha
iAmACupOfJello chapter 4 . 2/12/2010
awesome story!
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