|Reviews for Two Sides|
| Long Live BRUCAS chapter 1 . 1/2
Good analogy of the two of them. It fits them perfectly.
| Stormdaku chapter 1 . 3/5/2012
it's awesome.I love it. Keep writing!
| The Man Without A Name chapter 1 . 6/14/2011
It's great! Ik realy like the metaphors. And the thing about reading books... How do you even think of something awesome like that?
| morgo7kc chapter 1 . 1/19/2011
awesome! very interesting read
| JaneConstantine chapter 1 . 3/4/2010
This is really good and I think it describes very well both Peter and Neal...My favorite line is:
"...I took the broader more exciting path, not only did I step over the line I took a running leap over it."
:D Good job!
| InkStainedBlood chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
Wow. I must say, I loved your metaphors, i.e. "You are firmly planted to the ground; you use a parachute to ensure your safety. I am lost in the clouds; I jump because I want to feel the air around me, because I want to fly," and "You have always stuck to the straight and narrow, never once sticking a toe out of line. I took the broader more exciting path, not only did I step over the line I took a running leap over it." These are both intriguing, as a common metaphor simply used, but beautiful in the exact way that you captured Neal's voice and a broad overview of their lives. Wonderful job.
But if you'd like to hear a small comment of critique, I just have to say that the sentence, "...but if I will receive pleasure from it you can be assured it will got done much quicker," would sound better without "got done." For example, "...I'll get it done, but if there's any pleasure to be received from it, you can be assured that it will be finished quicker." Do you see what I'm implying? If it wasn't any help, I'm sorry...it still was a fantastic piece. Congrats. -Jesse
| Sparky Dorian chapter 1 . 1/31/2010
That was so awesome! Very true. Neal and Peter are both wonderful characters.
| Stephosaur chapter 1 . 1/23/2010
omg...I LOVED IT!
AND VERY BEAUTYFUL!
| JeanneZ84 chapter 1 . 1/6/2010
I liked this story.
Yes you are so and Peter are totally oppite of the other but I do like them both so much.
| Eliche chapter 1 . 12/18/2009
| Maira the Panda chapter 1 . 12/2/2009
Too poetic. And half wrong. I'd give you specifics, but I'm lazy.
| Good chapter 1 . 11/17/2009
Nice writing, I liked it.
| Cynosist chapter 1 . 11/11/2009
the comparisons you made were very colorful and illustrative. i really like your writing :)
| RascalFlattsS chapter 1 . 11/11/2009
I like it. I think it describes Peter & Neal really well. Good job!
| Serena-chan1 chapter 1 . 11/11/2009
Great job! I love the comparisons you made.