|Reviews for Holodeck Date: Captain Proton|
| StandingOnTheRooftops chapter 1 . 8/1/2010
Mwahahahaha! OMG! I just ADORED this story! I can so picture B'Elanna taking over the program like that! Whoop! That would have made a great episode!
| Riss - uscmam chapter 1 . 12/3/2009
Another nice chapter.
It was great to see B'Elanna standing up to the stereotype and putting her own spin on it. She certainly got a lot of concessions out of her man!
| longnite chapter 1 . 11/11/2009
Oh, you so hit the mark here! B'Elanna finally gets to drive the point home and gets to tinker with one of Tom's sexist programs. Really enjoyed how she took him down a few pegs and made him take a close look at it and see how its perceived by others. Never saw Tom as being "that" shallow...but some show writer must have been a real Paris hater to draw him like that!
This was a great read and a good follow up to your Fairhaven story. Glad you got them together in the end...and at proposed sun soaked beach to boot! We can only hope that Tom would learn his lesson and program a beach setting and leave the holo folk out! Well done!;)