I am in love with part one and can't wait to read the next one

Loved this scene.

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loved how Jake put Ziggy in his place.

re-reading again, but this time reviewing. love this fic.

I'm sorry. I like your writing, its easy to read and has great potential but i hate that you made Nessie so bitchy. I don't wanna be rude cause I respect you and your work but I think that aspect of nessies character way off.

This is an amazing story!

Wow! That was such a good chapter and I loved reading Jacob's POV. I think that Jacob getting an education is very important so I'm glad you put that in there. I'm really enjoying your story so far.

I don't normally read Ness/Jake stories but I really love all your other work so I decided to check this out too. I love the way you are writing Nessie and I can just tell this will be a good story. :) Your writing is truly wonderful and you are quite talented. I look forward to reading more. I hope if the Cullens do move that Jacob goes with but since he is the only alpha I don't think that's going to happen. I like that you picked Seth to be his beta. Great start!

I really enjoyed part 1thx u so much

Love the story! Something for you to review: there vs their vs they're usage! Also were vs where! All having completely different meaning! As the story is great and you have lovely flow of paragraphs etc it is a shame to have those errors that should be so easy to fix and identify!

This is such a amazing story i love it you need to make more plz it would be the best thing in the world if you made a fourth one! I love it!

Omg i love the story make more series plz

LOVED PART I! ON TO PART II!

I LOVED IT! TO PART II!