Reviews for The Half Vamipre Chronicles
Guest chapter 9 . 6/24/2014
I love love this fan fiction one of the best I have read about Jacob and nessie please continue it is wonderful!
raspberry.essence21 chapter 39 . 5/27/2014
So good! Thank you for using your gift of creativity to spoil all of us readers with a continuation of Jacob and Renesmee's story. It's a story that begs to be told and you have crafted it well. I can't wait to read part two. Bravo!
raspberry.essence21 chapter 31 . 5/26/2014
Loved this chapter. I even teared up a bit. Great writing!
raspberry.essence21 chapter 33 . 5/26/2014
Awesome chapter! Adding lemons is a definite plus-I hope to see more of them soon :o).
tmko1412 chapter 39 . 3/3/2014
I am in love with part one and can't wait to read the next one
luvtwilight4eva chapter 38 . 1/29/2014
Loved this scene.
luvtwilight4eva chapter 3 . 1/29/2014
:)
luvtwilight4eva chapter 2 . 1/29/2014
loved how Jake put Ziggy in his place.
luvtwilight4eva chapter 1 . 1/29/2014
re-reading again, but this time reviewing. love this fic.
Guest chapter 24 . 1/20/2014
I'm sorry. I like your writing, its easy to read and has great potential but i hate that you made Nessie so bitchy. I don't wanna be rude cause I respect you and your work but I think that aspect of nessies character way off.
casa with peace chapter 33 . 12/23/2013
This is an amazing story!
Chica76 chapter 2 . 11/28/2013
Wow! That was such a good chapter and I loved reading Jacob's POV. I think that Jacob getting an education is very important so I'm glad you put that in there. I'm really enjoying your story so far.
Chica76 chapter 1 . 11/28/2013
I don't normally read Ness/Jake stories but I really love all your other work so I decided to check this out too. I love the way you are writing Nessie and I can just tell this will be a good story. :) Your writing is truly wonderful and you are quite talented. I look forward to reading more. I hope if the Cullens do move that Jacob goes with but since he is the only alpha I don't think that's going to happen. I like that you picked Seth to be his beta. Great start!
Lashima chapter 39 . 11/18/2013
I really enjoyed part 1thx u so much
Guest chapter 27 . 11/5/2013
Love the story! Something for you to review: there vs their vs they're usage! Also were vs where! All having completely different meaning! As the story is great and you have lovely flow of paragraphs etc it is a shame to have those errors that should be so easy to fix and identify!
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