Reviews for Respiravi
annapsarudaki chapter 10 . 8/26/2017
A cliffhanger! Lucius is full of lies! It would be nice if you completed this fic.
I want to know what happens next.
annapsarudaki chapter 6 . 8/26/2017
Oh boy! He carved his initials into her arm.
Your story is inspired from "Eden" by obsessmuch, isn't it?
Anyway, it's interesting...
matkatry chapter 10 . 6/18/2016
very good...looking forward to more
michele magnolia chapter 10 . 1/14/2016
Oh boy oh boy oh boy
021448740041987 chapter 10 . 10/21/2015
This is so well written! The characters are as vivid as they were in Eden but youve brought a very different angle and scope to the Lumione story.
I really sincerely hope you continue writing this, though i'm guessing you have long moved on from the looks of tthings unfortunately. Ugh i find it so frustrating when there are really good unfinished gems like this!
anyways, here's hoping you come back one day despite the odds **fingers crossed**
prose.titute chapter 10 . 4/3/2015
prose.titute chapter 8 . 4/3/2015
Oh. My. GOD. Okay this has been my favourite chapter so far! I love this Rabastan/Hermione/Lucius dynamic. I like that you made Rabastan trust his brother enough to take Hermione over to him and show her branding. Nice touch! Speaking of touch... I guess now Hermione and Rabastan can't get it smexxxy now without Hermione hurting.
prose.titute chapter 5 . 4/3/2015
Hmm... once Lucius becomes more possessive of Hermione he probably won't like Rabastan carrying out such intimate duties will he...
prose.titute chapter 1 . 4/3/2015
This was a really great first chapter! I feel hooked onto the premise already. :) I see you haven't updated in over a year and that this is incomplete... I do hope inspiration reaches you soon! xx
Fantomette34 chapter 9 . 3/23/2015
Je reviens en arrière pour pouvoir poster : pitié, poursuivez votre histoire, elle est absolument géniale ! Elle en vaut vraiment la peine...
S'il vous plaît, continuez à écrire !
jensteed chapter 10 . 2/4/2015
I'm absolutely gutted that this was abandoned, it was excellent and riveting. Such an awful shame, I hope you come back to it (pretty pretty please?)
jensteed chapter 6 . 2/4/2015
I had shivers reading the end of this chapter, it was so terrifying and powerful!
jensteed chapter 4 . 2/4/2015
Very dark and honestly a little sickening, but in a good way...if that makes sense? I can never resist a truly dark Death Eater story and who better to fill it than the luscious Lucius ;) dying to see where it goes...kinda like Hermione (yeah, I know that was atrocious, lol)
bloomsburry-dhazellouise chapter 10 . 1/24/2015
it is an interesting story. It would be really great if you could update this. I wanted to know how this ends
Fantomette34 chapter 10 . 1/19/2015
Quelle fic fantastique ! Cela fait un an que vous ne l'avez pas mise à jour et c'est bien dommage car cette histoire est géniale, très bien écrite.
Pitié, continuez à écrire la suite, s'il vous plaît !
Bravo pour votre travail et bonne continuation !
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