Reviews for A Poem In Risa's POV
Neal Shitchermun chapter 1 . 2/24/2013
The lines were short. You could have lengthned them more to make some better rhymes. Had a nice meaning and flow to it but when spoken, sounded like a child.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/17/2013
This is WAY good!
NearTheRiver chapter 1 . 1/17/2010
I like this. :3

I loved the book as well. _

Good job.
Auden Talricter chapter 1 . 11/17/2009
I think it was good, but some of your lines had way too many syllables to flow well. I would change the lines: when I I'm in the dark, Everday like I should, It's not my destiny, and pretty much the last eight lines. Other than that, it was pretty good.