Reviews for Not Yet
cloopio chapter 1 . 12/5/2009
hahaha! this was very creative! and very fun to read :)
shepweir always chapter 1 . 11/16/2009
Fabulous story. Characters are right on. Cool how you included Astrid. Never had a clue she was the cute black

woman at the bar.
Viktorija chapter 1 . 11/12/2009
Well done!
wjobsessed chapter 1 . 11/12/2009
lol Very clever, Xeen!

Love that someone else is watching Bolivia's moves.

Seemed very natural to have Astrid's character gay, as the actress who plays her is.

I would LOVE to see another fic with these two ladies. Perhaps Alex spots them kissing, and Astrid owes her money for it?
zeusfluff chapter 1 . 11/11/2009
Ha ha! This was a great story XC! I needed a good laugh. *Sigh* Peter and Olivia always playing hard to catch with each other... I hope you write another story like this soon!

Thanks so much,


P.S. I also have a story in the Fringe section as well if you'd like to take a look at it. It's called: Insecurities and Unknown Realities. Feel free to let me know what you think! Thanks!
Ocein chapter 1 . 11/11/2009
AW that was cute and I like your portrayal of Astrid! Care to do a follow up?
bearlee-there chapter 1 . 11/11/2009
"His hands started to draw in the air complicated patterns of their own." They're always on the move, aren't they?

Well, that didn't go quite where I expected. Love the bit between Alex and Astrid.

Good job, you little tease.