Reviews for Her Heart's Kingdom
RogueInTheShadows chapter 10 . 6/26/2011
plz continue to wright this storie i love this already
KingofHeartless'09 chapter 1 . 1/4/2011
it will get real so good start
organizationkhII chapter 10 . 1/4/2011
XD please update soon
organizationkhII chapter 9 . 12/7/2010
Yeah I was waiting for the next chapter for months but I'm glad you updated :D

Funny in the character dialogue XD
Simple Shimmers chapter 9 . 11/27/2010

Alex: *rolls eyes* ...stupid fangirl..

Emi: Respect you elders!'m taller than you

Emi: Anndd...i'm taller than Zexion.

Alex: *sweat drop* Zexion's a midgit

Emi: oh...that explains a lot...

Alex: ...I'm going to kill you...

Emi: gasp!...*Sweat drop*...why?

Alex: your too happy and Emo..Bipolar much?

Emi: you know i'm not Bipolar i just have random mood swings

Alex: stupid...Fangirls...Damn Poptarts...Stupid Mansex and his Gayness poor boys...

Emi:...SHIT...OH DAMN!

Alex: cuss to much for a blunt, oblivious, shy and childish midgit...

Emi: OH DAMN HOLY SHIT DAMN I FORGOT TO...uh...i forgot...oops

Alex:...*Sweat drop*...what a idiot im pretty sure Emily was going to tell you-

Emi: Please update hehehe i like your story.

Alex:...*walks away*...

Emi: can we be in your story me and alexa here are Twins sorta only we are cousins and i'm shorter. I really wanna tease Xemnas cough Mansex cough. Besides...ROXAS IS HOT! and i really want to help sam and the others and sora and roxas escape from the organization 13 well...Bye!
KingofHeartless'09 chapter 4 . 10/18/2010
Best friends use you as an experment and let you die lol good stuff update pleaee?
labs4life chapter 9 . 10/18/2010
Freakin' good. Don't let this die, it's real good.
Scribbification chapter 1 . 10/7/2010
I was laughing so hard I almost passed out. You have a great sense of humor, and keep it up! This stroy has potential, and lotsa laughs. XD
AWESOME chapter 3 . 9/20/2010
AWESOME CHAPTER! Anyway you could continue the Kadaj Khronicles? they're way cool... :3
organizationkhII chapter 8 . 7/8/2010
i love this chapter! keep writing!
iwritetolive chapter 8 . 6/11/2010
Can't wait for the next chapter, keep it up!
Reno'sDemon chapter 8 . 6/11/2010
O.O That last bit threw me for a loop. That was so unexpected. but nonetheless, I liked it!
iwritetolive chapter 7 . 5/18/2010
I love this fanfiction! I couldn't stop laughing the entire time and if you're having writer's block I have some suggestions.

-The nezt day they go to the carnival and Taz makes a brief appearence.

-Cloud might have er...lets just say coffee *poor Axel*

-What happens if Xemnas said to destroy Sam *maybe not...*

-the potion had another *good or bad* side effect

-um...they go nuts if they had a free coffee booth...*oh dear*

-They meet Sora and Co.

hope it helps and can't wait for next chapter!
organizationkhII chapter 3 . 4/24/2010
wow the story's coming on nicely!
organizationkhII chapter 2 . 4/24/2010
wow, nice job!
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