|Reviews for Five Times|
| Bewitching the mind chapter 1 . 11/12/2009
wow so great!
you write so well and the simplicity was beautiful.
i would love to see something like the 5th time to happen on the show
i felt like it was really in character (especially for this season! I'm not sure if you noticed, but Tony has definitely changed)
i loved your word variation and use of deep adjectives
keep up the fantastic writing!
| lacrevette35 chapter 1 . 11/12/2009
I totally love this story! It's really cute.
| fredcymraes chapter 1 . 11/12/2009
I liked the happy ending
| Anonymous chapter 1 . 11/12/2009
This was great! :D You got the characters just right and the writing is excellent except for a couple of typos here and there. My favorite line?
Even Vance had smiled at him.
But that had been creepy.
| jacksrevenge chapter 1 . 11/12/2009
AW that was so adorable. i liked the part about Vance.. hahaha. i really liked Tony in this fic, and i appreciate that it wasn't some grand, dramatic, thing for him to tell her that he loved her. and his mistakes were sweet. very good job! :]
| cupid10 chapter 1 . 11/12/2009
| GRACE5 chapter 1 . 11/12/2009
i totally loved this story.
| Lune-Solei chapter 1 . 11/12/2009
Oh, this was adorable and lovely. You had me smiling the whole way through (except maybe when he got shot but then again what he said...)! I think this was very in character and I hope that when they do get together it happens somewhat like this. Great job and thank you for sharing!
| timewalker05 chapter 1 . 11/12/2009
A difficult question: How would Tony finally say ILY to Ziva. I like you answer(s).
Good job keeping everyone in character.
| LoryLynn1186 chapter 1 . 11/12/2009
Absolutely adorable. I especially liked the bit with Abby in the beginning. I could totally see her doing that and I doubt McGee would have any problem telling her she was beautiful (but I digress). Excellent story. I hope it works out this nicely on the show.
| Judroozz chapter 1 . 11/12/2009
I LOVED IT!
really, you're a great writer!
please write more about NCIS!
| cinematus chapter 1 . 11/12/2009
Really nice story. As you already saud at the end everything just feels natural and the characters are well written and I think you got them quite right. That makes the story so much fun to read. It just has this natural flow and you get into it immediately.
I like the fact that you kept the teasing and flirting pretty much the whole story. I always loved that between those two in the first seasons.
I hope you'll write some more NCIS stories in the future because I think you've got the talent to capture the characters quite well and write about them in a realistic way.
| strictlysuperb chapter 1 . 11/12/2009
very good Tony is so cute :)
| lisa chapter 1 . 11/12/2009
| Viktorija chapter 1 . 11/12/2009