Reviews for Five Times
tonyandziva4ever chapter 1 . 11/12/2009
that was very cute! amazing story!
WinnerGrey chapter 1 . 11/12/2009
Aww! I love this story! You wrote the characters very well. And the ending...so cute. And I agree with you...I really really "whole-NCIS-heartedly" hope Tony and Ziva get together eventually.

Keep up the good work!
scousemuz1k chapter 1 . 11/12/2009
Lovely! I think the bull pen was the perfect place. I hope one day she told him about what he said when he thought he was dying; it was so romantic and what we know he's got inside him but it's unlikely the scriptwiters will ever let him say! Dreams of a future, a nice chest wound, Poppa Gibbs, hint of sex, gentle unsnarky Ziva - what more could a reader want?
fieryprophet chapter 1 . 11/12/2009
This was very well done, with good pacing and minimal spelling errors :)

I still think they'd have to work harder at keeping it from Giibs, though. He'd love all the extra opportunities for headslaps.
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