|Reviews for Vertigo on Holiday Road|
| DGMLover12564 chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
road trip FAIL! haha!
i love this exept for a few bits, which i only like
nah, jokes jokes, its all amazing!
| Uniasus chapter 1 . 8/27/2011
lol, I laughed so hard during thing one
| Proof of Repair chapter 1 . 7/23/2011
This story was absolutely delicious. Everything from Lavi's lip piercing to Lenalee shanking J.K. Rowling's house out of the map had me quivering with glee. AU or no AU, everyone was wonderfully characterized in my opinion, and I could NOT be happier. Thank you, thank you, thank you for this. It was a delight and has, in many ways, rekindled my love of the fandom. Much obliged.
| xxbeni.music.soul chapter 1 . 2/7/2010
Teehee I heart this so much it hurts D:
The whole KanLena interaction was as yummy as it gets, I mean it was so squee-worthy, and I'm not even kidding :3
Hah, Lavi is such a little tease; how can you just NOT love him?
And Poor, poor cute itty Allen always getting the shortest of them sticks...
Love it. Total fave
| Namean chapter 1 . 12/19/2009
Oh god, fuck, this is funny, I cracked up so many times.
Is there gonna be another chapter?
| seemslikeaporno chapter 1 . 11/25/2009
I'm definitely a huge fan of your work. XD This is seriously (SERIOUSLY) one of the best Kanda/Lavi stories I've ever read. From the humor, to the sweet moments (I see them, I swear), all of it was tied together perfectly. I really like your writing style, to put it simply. xD
And your Kanda? Epic win.
I love that you make him more human than the anime does. You make me think of him as a real person, with -gasp- REAL FEELINGS O: and that's pretty awesome. :D
Oh, and Kanda/Lavi sexytimes? yespls. :'D
So yeah. Basically, you rock. This story rocks. Andd I'm counting on you to bring me happiness. kthnx. :D
| this be a dead account chapter 1 . 11/24/2009
Honestly? I didn't even want to review this story because I was scared of how long I would end up writing it to be. D: But I felt guilty, so I have to now. Please don't report me for spam. ;A;
Oh geez. Your writing style. It blew me away, yet again. How do you capture them like that? Kanda's, well, perfectly Kanda, and Lavi's just the adorable, kickable ass-moron he always is, flirting with danger. Both ways, I guess. And Lenalee's that perfect girl once more, in that she's so imperfect. Haha. And Allen- I think I love how he's characterized the most. As an annoying man-child. xD
And then on top of their amazing characterizations, you manage to tack on how they interact, and it. Is fucking perfect. Especially Lavi. xD I adored that he pretended to cheat on Kanda with Allen, but the best part was after he gave Kanda three BJs (he got what he wanted xD), and it was revealed that the bag of M&Ms only had a few left in it, and that he had belonged to Kanda the whole time. Gah, I don't know, that realization just gave your Lavi THAT much more layering.
It was also really IC for Kanda to be so possessive of Lavi, and naturally assume that he wouldn't dare frolick around, even if they were just 'fuck buddies.' (Don't you love that term? 8D) But then Lavi turns around and steals the chip out of Allen's mouth, and flirts shamelessly and all sorts of fun, infidel things.
And for some reason, I really liked the way that Kanda kept getting pissed off when people said "sleeping with" instead of "rooming". Tenting. Whatever. And also, the crap that went down between Allen and Lenalee... D: Baw, poor man-child and Lena Speaking of which, I loved how protective Kanda was of her. And how she taunted Allen, saying she'd marry him instead. xD That was beautiful cruelty.
I could go on and on, BUT JUST ONE MORE, I PROMISE
Tyki "saucy" roflcopter.
Thank you so much for posting this story. xD I fell hard in love with it. And now I have to reread it again, damn you!
| Evanescent Silence chapter 1 . 11/13/2009
10 minutes later
whoa. just... whoa.
I LOVE YOU. seriously. I shall bow down to you for eternity for having written this. it was outrageously, shamelessly, frighteningly, awesomely good, and EPIC, yes (oh, the epicness of it had me sighing happily in satisfaction!) and I think I'm running out of good enough adjectives to describe it. I wish i could rate this besides just favouriting it, but alas, that is not how works, so I guess I'll have to settle for favouriting it.
your characterization is perfect. Kanda is absolutely... I have no words. *happy sigh* Lavi, too. and Lenalee, oh, Lenalee, you naughty girl, you.
I laughed and smirked and gasped and overall had an awesome time while reading this. it all just flowed and /happened/ and the time flew by as I read it and i was even startled when I noticed it was over, it was like: *reading (& lovin it) reading (& lovin it) reading (& lovin it) STOP* "wait, what? what's this? it's over?" xD
so yeah. THANK YOU. the rest of my week will be brighter because of this fic. hell, the whole damn month, even.
| Fret chapter 1 . 11/12/2009
"By the time they are driving quite safely (in Kanda’s humble opinion), the rest of them are rooted to their seats, passing cautionary glances to each other. Kanda can taste their fear. It is like corn syrup on Halloween night when you successfully scare the shit out of the neighborhood brats."
This is one of the best lines I have ever read.
Even if this wasn't a fanfic, I'd still adore it. I absolutely love your writing style and I enjoyed every bit of this, all the while picturing the events as they unfolded.
Fuck you very much. ;)
| bloodiedangle chapter 1 . 11/12/2009
Epic. Win. Really.
This made my day3
| Meow-chan3 chapter 1 . 11/12/2009
Wah, okay, this is my first time posting on any of your fictions, even though I've LOVED your stuff for a very long time, so this will be kind of a general comment.
Another really fun read from your AU series! xD I normally don't care too much for high school fictions, 'cause everyone does them. But I like yours 'cause I think they're out of the norm from what I expect. 3
I always enjoy reading your characterizations the most. There is something so real about the way the characters talk and act. The writing is so natural, and so... obvious? I don't know how to explain it. Like no one writes this way, but they should! It doesn't feel like I'm reading at all. It's like they're all right there, and time just flows.
The way you write Kanda and Lavi just reminds me over and over why I love this pairing as much as I do. It seems too many people over exaggerate Kanda, or worse, are completely off about him. But your writing is just *perfect*. You show a healthy does of the grumpy Yuu everyone knows, but also show that it's not the only emotion he has, and that he's perfectly capable of showing his softer side without going over board with it or have him secretly deny it every other second. You don't know how much I *thank* you for this, because too many people do it too often, and it really irks me, because that's just not Yuu.
I enjoy how you've written Allen in these stories, btw. Although I will say that I don't think he acts like Allen in these AU fictions, there is some sort of flavor there that you added to him and it works. I think Allen as himself would be too dull for these fics, so even modified a bit, it's still a joy to read. 3
Really, I just can't stress how much I adore your characterizations! And that says something coming from me. The number one reason I don't read fanficions often is due to bad characters. I have not once stopped reading any of your fictions due to a disagreement I had with how any of the characters were portrayed. That's a gift not many people have. I, for one, am definitely jealous! xD
I hope you will continue writing for this crazy series. For as long as you keep writing them, I will keep reading! 3
| Tossino chapter 1 . 11/12/2009
Wow... I... Loved... EVERY. SINGLE. BIT. OF. THIS! XD
Omg it was so epic! So cute and awesome and stuff but it still showed you real life and all its troubles and omg I loved the Kanda/Lenalee interactions so much And of COURSE Kanda gets what he wants, three blowjobs holy crap, and and...
Just wow. I really don't know what else I can say, except... I love this AU series so much! 8D
| Harmony283 chapter 1 . 11/12/2009
*smiling and trying hard NOT to laugh because her roommate is trying to take a nap*
Ff...this...was awesome. And hilarious XD *please excuse her while she tries to compute it*
Definitely will re-read later *when she can actually read without roommates possible looking over the shoulderness*
But yeah. Awesome. Very much so XD *feels inspired now* ya for inspiration XD
| KeleosNoOnna chapter 1 . 11/12/2009
OH MY GAWD THIS WAS JUST TOO TOO HKDGSADHAGSDHAS AMAZING AND BRILLIANT AND HILARIOUS AND AND I LOVED IT SO SO MUCH I CAN'T REALLY LEAVE A DECENT REVIEW SORRY BYE