Reviews for A stranger in forks part 1
Sparxana chapter 4 . 3/13/2012
Fear The Baby-Blue Cloud chapter 1 . 2/29/2012
AuntiePanda chapter 4 . 12/7/2009
Its a good chapter and I liked it but u really need to spellcheck and read through it before u post it :) I cant wait to see how this all turns out tho so i may end up bugging u to tell me :) lol
GothicPheonix chapter 4 . 11/26/2009
Love it; but I do think you might want to have a beta reader to look over your last chapters to help you with some spelling errors :) I LOVE Alice XD
GothicPheonix chapter 3 . 11/22/2009
I was a bit confused. So her parents actually divorced...? though her mom was dead, but then Jim, Kim and Amanda...? Who are they? And what did you mean flashbacks about Bella and herself? Because she only had a flashback of herself not Bella. I love it but it was confusing.
AuntiePanda chapter 1 . 11/12/2009
First Review! :D this is the best you've ever writen by far! i love it and i cant wait to see wot happens and i cant wait for my previews tht i better be getting miss! lmao oh and if u want an authors note on ur chapter just edit the document on ur uploads and then replace the chapter with the new copy! dnt have authors notes as chapters ok :) it bugs the hell outta me and alot other people :) but awesome first chapter and dnt give up on this one :D

Abbie :D