|Reviews for Brotherhood|
| sangkutdalamfiksyen chapter 1 . 12/16/2009
*tackles hugs* Oh how I love thee. Your description is perfect. Concise straight to the point and still make me go aw.
Also, I find it rather admirable that you make it platonic. Because I mean with these two being so close its easy to go a little over the top.
I'm officially a fan. XD
| Bundibird chapter 1 . 11/13/2009
Hehe! i loved the ending! "No, really. he did not just think that. Oh what did it matter? He was going to die anyway."
i loved this. YAY for cannon! Seriously - there are not enough authors writing non-slash arthur and merlin stories, so thank you for this.
a nice read - i quite enjoyed it. :)
| Wileret chapter 1 . 11/13/2009
Good one-shot. Sometimes, when you're watching the show you're wondering what the characters are think at some scenes, and this one had to be so like this.
Merlin and Arthur are as thick as thieves, really good friends. And it seems they have to save each others lifes oftenly, increasing their bond as friends who share a destiny that no-one knew about it :D.
| LovesAngst chapter 1 . 11/13/2009
Excellent! I would love to see Arthur's side of that thought process had Merlin actually died (of if Arthur thought so anyways)
| Alice I chapter 1 . 11/13/2009
I was drawn to this piece because you stated in the summary that the relationship was CANON.
I have a hard time with all the slash in this fandom, because I am hopelessly hooked on the Merlin characters.
I have actually read both of your Merlin fics I think. The one about Morgana coming to Camelot as a girl sounded familiar when I looked at your profile.
What I liked about this story was the changing - ever shifting emotions and train of thought going through Merlin's mind as he rode off to his death. A companion piece to this one would be nice if you ever feel like doing one. The thoughts of Merlin after his second trip to the Isle of the Blessed would be great!
The only thing I thought was strained was the internal insistance on Merlin's part that his feelings for Arthur were platonic in nature. The old saying "Me thinks thou dost protest too much" pops to mind. It almost sounded like he was trying to convince himself of that fact. I can see why you as an author in a slash riddled fandom would want to make that distinction very clear, but honestly - let your writing stand for itself. You made your point adimariably and using the word "love" in conncetion with two men doesn't make it slash.
I hope you decide to try your hand at another Merlin fic somewhere along the line. That would be nice to see.
| Fredricko chapter 1 . 11/12/2009
Thank you for this. ) I think you did a nice job of touching on the intimacy in the Arthur and Merlin relationship without making it sexual. Keep up your writing, Girl!
| Dianne chapter 1 . 11/12/2009
I liked this. It was for lack of a better word, sensible. I liked how frank you were about this being a canon relationship. This particular part of fanfiction really needs sub categories because I really don't appreciate sifting through graphic slash summaries. I don't have a problem with people writing what they want, it's just there's so many slash in this category that it's hard to get to one that isn't slash. I like your word, canonocity too! They should make that the sub category for stories in the Merlin category that are not slash. I liked Merlin's changing emotions while he rode on figuring he was going to die. Well done.