|Reviews for Accepting Boa|
| ocean.in.light chapter 2 . 10/2/2010
I like the rough idea of this. However, its lacking in authenticity and the general flow of Clive's work. as far as i remember, he never uses creatures already thought up, such as a centaur. Candy never names creatures unless they already have a name. The story moves too quick, Finnegan knows about Boa, and therefore loves candy, Candy befriends an animal, that is all character development that you could have expanded on. It has real potential to be a good piece. Id take it down and re-do it completely. I'll always be open to help if you need it.
| Booklover727 chapter 1 . 12/31/2009
I really liked it. I cant wait for the next chapter! Keep it up :) Thank you. Update soon!
| Red Stockings chapter 1 . 11/17/2009
Sounds like a good start :) Are you taking Candy on a journey of your making? I like how you've begun with Isleta, and by introducing a new character. Wonder what is going to happen to Candy now...