Reviews for Zeal
glossier chapter 1 . 4/14/2013
kissonthechic chapter 1 . 8/28/2012

The writing is wonderful and cute ;) And not to mention beautiful! Your descriptions of Peter made me love him even more. Thank you for writing this amazing piece!
Noooo longer in use chapter 1 . 5/19/2011
Oh. I cried 3 So beautiful.
surxi25 chapter 1 . 12/16/2010
Such a lovely retelling of the love between those two. Good work :)
jn.v13 chapter 1 . 12/5/2009
Love it.
Rosa Cotton chapter 1 . 11/20/2009
A splendid story! I loved the flow, style of this whole piece. Your descriptions were beautiful; I could picture everything clearly. Peter and Wendy's story fitted perfectly in this century. Parts I and IV were my favorite.

Wonderful job done!
Chellybaby chapter 1 . 11/15/2009
It really was lovely :) Your writing style is very sharp, very detailed. Apart from a few minor spelling mistakes, I really can't see anything wrong with it. _

~cb xo
brittersface chapter 1 . 11/14/2009

this was quite adorable.

and beautiful.