Reviews for What We Become
KendraPendragon chapter 4 . 9/28/2012
Oh boy, there is just no end to Cullen's suffering. Poor boy. :(
KendraPendragon chapter 3 . 9/28/2012
Hehe, that was very mean of you. Poor Cullen, putting him through this embarassment! How could he know that she was talking to the Mabari? Very sweet.
Yai, Wynne and Oghren! More Companions, pulease! My vote goes to Zevran. He will bring a little fun into this mysery!
KendraPendragon chapter 2 . 9/28/2012
That was...weird. It really is a shame that this should be their first kiss. Well, but is it a kiss, really? No, no, it wasn't. That didn't count. It was a coincidential touch of two pair of lips. That happens all the time! Don't know where, but I bet it does. ;)
Poor Cullen. What this might do to him?
KendraPendragon chapter 1 . 9/28/2012
Like it very much. First meeting is as odd and uncomfortable like it should be. Cullen, bitter from all the loss and things he must have seen and she is all worn out from fighting...and maybe losing Alistair? Just guessing.
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tgail73 chapter 40 . 9/27/2012
I absolutely love this story so much! Once again, thank you for writing this amazing tale.

tgail73 chapter 19 . 9/27/2012
This is the second time I've read this story and I am still in awe of your writing. Your characters are so very interesting. You give them a life outside the game. They are so well written, I am emotionally invested in what happens to them. Thank you again, for bringing this wonderful story to life. 3
GlysMari chapter 15 . 9/26/2012
"And then the Maker sent me Amell." - Once again I return to reread this tale and I find my breath catching in my throat and my eyes filled with tears. The way you portray your characters is beautiful.
IBlameBradley chapter 40 . 9/13/2012
Sequal? Yes please! I know I'm a little late to the party, but I love this story, and once again I find myself at a loss for what to do now. Maybe get some early nights now that I'm not reading this story every night. Anyway, great work and I love your writing!
IBlameBradley chapter 9 . 9/7/2012
I will go down with this ship.
IBlameBradley chapter 6 . 9/6/2012
Oh my god, this was the best chapter ever! I had to bite back laughter because everyone in my house is asleep. Hilarious! I love this story.
RainbowHeart chapter 40 . 8/12/2012
This was awesome! I can't get enough of it. The plot, the characters, the interactions! EVERYTHING! You did everything I ever hoped for in a Dragon Age fic and still made it plausible and seem authentic to what Bioware had.


Going to go read the rest of the series now.
Guest chapter 6 . 8/8/2012
This was perhaps the greatest chapter a have had the peasure of reading. The way you write everyones favorite dwarf is fantastic.
Vema chapter 40 . 5/11/2012
I love it! An enthralling read, and a gem of a piece. :) I hope that sequel you hinted at happened... *goes to check*
Vema chapter 16 . 5/8/2012
Woot! I love this story. I also love Bann Teagan, and although he's Cullen's rival here, he's still just so wonderful. Great job!
Dunquixote chapter 40 . 4/14/2012
I did not to expect to find myself close to tears while reading a fan fic, but as I was close to finishing the story, I often found myself that way. Again, that shows how wonderful you write. I envy your talent at not being repetitive in the transitions-how you set up each line and dialogue. That's something I'm struggling with as I'm writing my first fan fic. I have to say, I loved your depiction of Oghren! The last three nights I have been reading this, I found myself snickering and laughing a loud so many times. I could just hear Steve Blum's voice, as Oghren, and the Oghren's vulgar language and habit as I am accustomed to from playing to the game. I occasionally thought that there were moments that I thought made him even funnier than he was in Origins. Excellent work! I am sure if you become a "professional writer," if not one already," you'll certainly be an excellent one. I look forward to reading the sequel to this fan fic. :)
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